A Note from James:
I have to say, this next guest has recently become one of my all-time favorite writers, presenting a very different style from what I'm accustomed to. I started reading one of his books, and it turned out to be "Table for Two," which includes some short fiction and a novella titled "Even Hollywood." At the time, I didn't know it was the sequel to his first novel, ""Rules of Civility."
He also wrote "A Gentleman in Moscow," one of the best books I've ever read. In fact, by the time this podcast is released, it will have been adapted into a TV series starring Ewan McGregor, which looks amazing. All of his books rank among the best fiction I've ever encountered.
I highly recommend "A Gentleman in Moscow," "Table for Two," "Rules of Civility," and "The Lincoln Highway." the latter of which I'm currently reading post-podcast. I hope to speak with Mr. Towles again, as I now have questions about "The Lincoln Highway." He was incredibly open about his writing process, which differs significantly from those of other writers I've discussed in my ten years of conversations. It was such a pleasure to delve into his experiences and how he crafts his books.
I can't express enough how much I admire Amor Towles, author of "A Gentleman in Moscow" and the upcoming collection "Table for Two." I also recommend checking out the TV series adaptation of "A Gentleman in Moscow."
Amor Towles' Books:
Episode Description:
This discussion with Amor Towles offers a profound insight into his unique approach to writing, character creation, and thematic exploration across his notable works, including 'A Gentleman in Moscow' and 'Rules of Civility.' The conversation sheds light on Towles' years-long process of developing three-dimensional characters, reflecting on the societal roles and individual identities within his narratives.
Towles discusses the influence of his investment background on his disciplined approach to writing, and the cultural impact of his work, including television adaptations. He emphasizes the importance of empathy, identity, resilience, and the authenticity of his characters, illustrating the nuanced interplay between an individual's role within society and their journey. Additionally, Towles shares insights on the contrasting crafts of novel and short story writing, and his transition from a career in finance to becoming a celebrated author, highlighting the ever-relevant nature of his thematic concerns in historical and contemporary contexts.
Episode Summary:
00:00 Introduction to a Favorite Writer and His Works
02:35 Diving Deep into the Writing Process with Amor Towles
04:41 Exploring Character Development and the Art of the Novel
17:03 The Craft of Writing: From Concept to Language
28:53 The Richness of Language and the Writer's Knowledge
38:24 Exploring the Art of Writing: Insights and Metaphors
39:41 Character Development and the Power of Subconscious Creativity
42:36 The Revision Process: Crafting and Refining a Story
46:54 Navigating Historical Contexts and Character Perspectives
57:52 The Complexity of Social Classes and Personal Identity
01:04:40 Interconnected Stories and Characters Across Novels
01:13:10 Exploring the Creative Process Behind a Novella
01:13:47 The Noir Tradition and Writing Style
01:15:43 The Unique Appeal of Short Stories
01:17:10 Experimenting with Narrative Perspectives
01:20:50 The Art of Surprise in Short Stories
01:23:24 Personal Reflections in Writing
01:28:57 Adapting Novels for Television
01:33:10 The Aspirational Nature of 'A Gentleman in Moscow'
01:35:06 Patience and Process in Writing and Investing
01:42:20 Concluding Thoughts and Future Projects
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[00:01:18] And he is a very different kind of style that I'm used to reading, but his, I started
[00:01:24] reading one of his books and it turned, well, it turned out to be the book that's just
[00:01:29] coming out table for two, which is some of the short fictions plus a novella called
[00:01:33] even Hollywood, which I didn't know at the time was the sequel to his first novel, Rules
[00:01:38] of Civility.
[00:01:39] And then he wrote another book, A Gentlemen in Moscow, which is one of the best books
[00:01:44] I've ever read.
[00:01:45] In fact, by the time this podcast comes out, it's going to be a TV series starring you
[00:01:50] and McGregor and looks amazing in the book.
[00:01:54] Again, all of his books are along the best fiction I've ever read.
[00:02:00] So I highly recommend Gentlemen in Moscow, Table for Two, Rules of Civility, The Lincoln
[00:02:07] Highway is another book of his, which actually I'm just reading right now post podcast.
[00:02:12] I hope I get a chance to talk to Emma or Tolls again because I have questions now about
[00:02:17] Lincoln Highway.
[00:02:18] And he was so open about his writing process and it's a really different writing process
[00:02:23] than I've, I've talked to, well, you guys know, I've talked to a lot of writers over
[00:02:26] the past 10 years and he has a very different process for his writing.
[00:02:32] He's very open about it.
[00:02:33] Such a pleasure to talk to.
[00:02:35] I always enjoy talking to writers but he, we really went into depth into his experiences
[00:02:40] and how he puts together his books and kind of the experiences in his books.
[00:02:46] I can't say enough about how much I admire this person.
[00:02:49] Emma Tolls, author of a Gentlemen in Moscow, author of the upcoming book of short fiction,
[00:02:54] Table for Two, which I highly recommend and of course, the TV series, check it out,
[00:03:00] Gentlemen in Moscow.
[00:03:05] This isn't your average business podcast and he's not your average host.
[00:03:10] This is the James Altiger Show.
[00:03:22] By the way, I wanted to tell you, the very first thing I read by you was your shorter
[00:03:29] fictions like this book Table for Two which is coming out.
[00:03:32] Oh no kidding.
[00:03:33] Yeah.
[00:03:34] And then so I read, you know, even Hollywood before rules of civility.
[00:03:39] So, and Eve struck me as this amazing character which I then recognized that type of character
[00:03:47] in your other novels.
[00:03:49] There's a certain nobility to the characters that I could tell you love the most.
[00:03:56] You're right.
[00:03:57] And like, you know, I know your most recent book coming out is a Table for Two, it's
[00:04:03] your short fictions but really I just also just love of course, a Gentlemen
[00:04:09] in Moscow which you could also arguably be promoting as well since the TV series starts
[00:04:13] March 29th.
[00:04:15] Yeah.
[00:04:16] So if you don't mind, maybe first we could talk about that book because I just, there's
[00:04:20] so many things I love about this book and it strikes me when reading this book, the
[00:04:28] characters or everything.
[00:04:30] It seems like you've focused almost for years on building these characters and then layered
[00:04:36] around them is the backdrop of history, the hotel, the other characters to give kind
[00:04:43] of this semblance of a moving plot as history moves forward.
[00:04:47] But it's really, it's just ways to bring about these amazing characters and particularly
[00:04:53] the count to give him more layers of his personality and that's the book is his evolution
[00:04:58] almost.
[00:04:59] Yeah.
[00:05:00] That's true.
[00:05:01] Absolutely.
[00:05:02] So constructing that, am I close and how you constructed something like that?
[00:05:09] So I'll start by saying I've written fiction since I was a kid, wrote it in high school,
[00:05:14] college, graduate school.
[00:05:16] It's really been the thing that I've always wanted to do the most but if you think about
[00:05:23] narrative, the novel, let's say comparing it to other classical art forms like landscape
[00:05:31] painting of the Hudson River School or the classical repertoire, the symphonies and
[00:05:36] conchertoes of the 19th century.
[00:05:38] A Hudson River School painting can when you see it across the room, you can have an immediate
[00:05:44] sense of time and place and mood like the minute you second you see it.
[00:05:48] I don't know, I don't mean like you know what hill you were standing on.
[00:05:51] I just mean the grander sense of nature, of possibility of the evening, of spring or
[00:05:57] all these various elements that speak to you as soon as you see it.
[00:06:01] And in music, music in a similar way can transmit an emotional state instantly.
[00:06:08] You know, a very capable cellist can make you happy or sad within three strokes of the
[00:06:15] bow of the boat, excuse me.
[00:06:17] And now a novel can do both of these things.
[00:06:21] It can give you a sense of time and place and mood.
[00:06:23] It can give you, put you into an emotional state of one kind or another, make you happy
[00:06:29] sad, angry, laughing.
[00:06:33] It is more cumbersome than these other two art forms in achieving these goals.
[00:06:38] Now what a novel can do that the other art forms cannot do is put you in the position
[00:06:43] of another human being because that's really what is unique I think to the novel.
[00:06:48] And that's why it's been such a persistent art form over several hundred years.
[00:06:55] I don't even think film can achieve it in the same degree, but when we read a well-written
[00:06:59] novel, we can become so tied to a character or individual characters that when something funny
[00:07:05] happens to them in the book, we laugh out loud in our living room.
[00:07:10] When something sad happens to them, we cry over the pages.
[00:07:13] We can get furious and indignant when they've been cheated.
[00:07:16] So this is great sense of bond that can occur between the reader and an individual that
[00:07:22] is well crafted on a novel.
[00:07:24] And the reader can start to see the world through their eyes.
[00:07:26] And this, of course, is why the novel has been many studies have shown that it is very
[00:07:33] powerful tool for developing empathy because it is by stepping into these other shoes
[00:07:39] and looking at the world through the eyes of this other individual and adopting some
[00:07:42] of their problems and challenges that we are more capable in doing that with a human being
[00:07:51] who is across, who we meet in the street to empathize with their situation.
[00:07:57] So it's a big intro, I understand.
[00:07:59] But I'm getting to your question, which is that given all I've just said, if you're interested
[00:08:06] in writing serious narrative, then focusing on the creation of three-dimensional characters
[00:08:14] really should be of major concern.
[00:08:17] You know, a primary objective, right?
[00:08:20] A novelist has to master setting, has to master dialogue, the communication of themes,
[00:08:27] the development of the poetics of the language, you know, has to master all kinds of elements
[00:08:32] of craft, but creating a three-dimensional individual or a series of them is really probably
[00:08:39] the most important.
[00:08:40] And that's why we look at, you know, it's not a coincidence that Huck Finn is at the center
[00:08:46] of Huck Finn and Anna Karenina is at the center of Anna Karenina, you know, that these individuals
[00:08:52] really are at the heart of those novels.
[00:08:55] Now there's a lot of literary art behind the story of Anna Karenina that Tolstoy has developed.
[00:09:02] There's a lot of literary art behind Twain's Huck Finn, but the individuals are in sharper
[00:09:09] leaf for the reader.
[00:09:10] So that's a big focus and that's what I've spent, you know, I don't know, since I was a kid,
[00:09:16] constantly experimenting and investigating how do you do this?
[00:09:19] How do you bring to life a different individual?
[00:09:22] You're probably, I really appreciate when a reader has read a book of mine then goes backwards
[00:09:26] right?
[00:09:27] And that's a great compliment when that happens.
[00:09:29] You are probably the only person on the planet who has read my short stories and work backwards.
[00:09:35] You know, because I mean, because you know, table for two there's only maybe 500 people
[00:09:38] who've read it in the country, right?
[00:09:40] So I love it that's where you started.
[00:09:42] Well, the short stories where I started, right?
[00:09:44] And we're most novelists start.
[00:09:46] And it's through the short story as a younger person but you practice this dynamic.
[00:09:51] You're constantly, each story is told from a different perspective.
[00:09:54] You know, so you, at least that's the way I did it, right?
[00:09:56] So I'm doing a short story and it's saying, okay, this is a young woman in Berkeley
[00:10:01] in the 1960s at the beginning of feminism or it's an old guy who repairs violins in Vienna
[00:10:07] in 1940 or you know, or 1910 or whatever.
[00:10:11] It's a young, you know, black American and the Jim Crow South, you know, who's lost his
[00:10:17] way home or whatever it is.
[00:10:20] You take that different person in the world who you are not and you start to try to imagine
[00:10:27] what is their situation?
[00:10:28] How do they see the world?
[00:10:29] What would they sound like?
[00:10:30] What would matter to them?
[00:10:32] What's their sensibility?
[00:10:34] And you start to, through the process of sort of the imaginative process,
[00:10:39] begin to construct this individual and what your goal is to make them
[00:10:44] as three-dimensional and intricate as a fellow human being.
[00:10:49] It's interesting because the way you're describing it, it's almost like,
[00:10:53] and I want to turn this into a question eventually, but there's craft in their psychology.
[00:10:58] So let's take a gentleman in Moscow for a second and then I want to look at
[00:11:04] even and some of these shorter stories.
[00:11:07] But you know, the count, the count in gentlemen in Moscow, you're given a person with
[00:11:16] a background, okay, this guy is a, you know, from the aristocracy he's not used to working
[00:11:22] hard labor and then you're given a context.
[00:11:25] It's this transition, this massive transition in the 20th century between kind of the
[00:11:31] Sars, Russia that he lived and grew up in and became an adult in.
[00:11:36] And it's immediately transitioning to this opposite, this Bolshevik revolution, the
[00:11:41] communist, and he stuck in the middle and literally stuck like he's exiled to live in
[00:11:46] this hotel the rest of his life.
[00:11:49] So it's you have this person with a lot of depth who's now put into a context with a
[00:11:53] lot of depth.
[00:11:54] And then from there we're given the benefits of history evolving and characters moving around
[00:12:03] him, and that creates the story he finds himself in.
[00:12:07] And I wonder, and you have to give him a lot of depth because he has to survive this
[00:12:12] transition.
[00:12:13] So even in the early chapters, he's going from being sentenced to what could be considered
[00:12:18] a horrible sentence by some, he realizes he has to survive this.
[00:12:22] So it'd be nice to people, he wasn't necessarily going to be nice to before and you know change
[00:12:26] certain habits and discover certain things and keep certain secrets.
[00:12:30] And from that the whole novel of ours.
[00:12:33] But I also sense, this is where the question comes in, there's a psychology here in that
[00:12:39] he's you, you're him a little bit.
[00:12:42] I will say from reading the little bit about your background, you know, your father was
[00:12:49] an investment banker at a very white shoe banking firm.
[00:12:52] You know, you went to Yale, you grew up among some of the finer things in life but also
[00:12:57] have seen the transition and several transitions in America.
[00:13:03] And how much do you infuse yourself into this character, particularly the main character?
[00:13:11] I would say very little.
[00:13:14] My wife would say very little, by the way.
[00:13:17] I mean, you know, she wishes I was the count.
[00:13:19] I wish I was the count.
[00:13:20] I wish I was the count by my own criticizing.
[00:13:22] No, I hear you.
[00:13:24] So me too.
[00:13:26] And of course any character you create there might be a thread of their behavior which is
[00:13:35] informed by some aspect of my own personality or experience.
[00:13:39] And that can be helpful in bringing that character to life.
[00:13:44] But you know, if you look at the breadth of my work, you know, rules of civility is a 25
[00:13:50] year old working class woman from New York and Lincoln Highway is an 18 year old kid and
[00:13:57] raised in a farm in Kansas in the 40s and 50s.
[00:14:01] So it is true that so there's a lot of variety there and never mind all the bit characters.
[00:14:07] And I'll bring up the rules of civility in a second because that's almost a mirror image
[00:14:11] of a gentleman in Moscow, but doesn't necessarily disagree with my point.
[00:14:16] Yeah.
[00:14:17] No, you're right.
[00:14:18] So let me give you a sense of the flavor of what happens.
[00:14:21] So for me as a writer is you start with this idea.
[00:14:24] Oh yeah.
[00:14:25] It's going to be a guy trapped in a hotel and then right away I was like, oh yeah, he
[00:14:28] could be in aristocrat.
[00:14:29] He could be in Russia.
[00:14:30] After the revolution he sentenced to house arrest in this fancy hotel across from the
[00:14:34] Kremlin called a Metropole and the book could be, you know, the entire span of, from the
[00:14:39] revolution to the Cold War, you know, all that is sort of in day one as I'm beginning
[00:14:43] to imagine the story.
[00:14:45] Now as you say, I immediately, I've got this guy who's in aristocrat and so now that
[00:14:50] you're right that my background gives me some insight into what that might mean.
[00:14:57] Now most of what I know about that is actually not from my own personal experience.
[00:15:01] It's from the fact that we've all read about the aristocracy in the 19th and 18th century
[00:15:07] whether we've studied history or we've read literature, you know, and you want to keep
[00:15:12] in mind that the aristocracy in England, France, Russia, Spain, Italy was all the same basically.
[00:15:18] Right?
[00:15:19] I mean they shared more in common with each other than they shared with their fellow countrymen.
[00:15:24] But now, but a portion of that heritage shows up in the United States in sort of the form
[00:15:31] of the gentlemen of, you know, say the founding fathers, Jefferson, Washington, Adams were
[00:15:37] absolutely, their ambition was to be, be gentleman.
[00:15:44] I mean to be gentleman in the traditional sense and that meant some combination of having
[00:15:50] manners, behaving well in society but more importantly being a person of integrity.
[00:15:55] And they saw those two things as really being bound at the hip.
[00:15:57] You know, so never lying, helping those who need fighting against the susceptibility to
[00:16:03] the sins, trying to bring out the greater virtues of the individual.
[00:16:09] These were part of the tradition of shivalry which ended up in the gentlemanly version
[00:16:15] of the aristocracy, terrible version of the aristocracy too, but the gentlemanly version was
[00:16:19] this.
[00:16:20] And that got inherited by the founding fathers who all studied the age of enlightenment and
[00:16:25] the Stoics and, you know, etc., etc.
[00:16:27] So yeah, growing up in Boston going to Yale, on the one hand you're studying the world
[00:16:37] to some degree when you're reading the 19th century novel or studying these historical
[00:16:43] figures.
[00:16:44] On the other hand you witness some version of it in, you know, Waspie Boston, let's say.
[00:16:49] So that might be a help, but at the end of the day I'm starting with a count.
[00:16:53] I have a sense of the aristocratic bearing from sort of the universal imprint, but then
[00:16:58] you got to figure out the individual.
[00:17:00] And so you start to imagine him.
[00:17:02] Where was his situation?
[00:17:03] You know, what was his childhood like?
[00:17:06] Where is parents?
[00:17:07] Who are his closest relatives?
[00:17:10] At no point really am I actually writing down what does he look like?
[00:17:13] I think I knew he was tall and then eventually I know he has a mustache, but that's kind
[00:17:16] of it.
[00:17:17] I don't care about that, you know.
[00:17:19] It's more trying to understand, begin to imagine what was his experience and that informs
[00:17:23] to some degree the kind of person he might be like.
[00:17:27] Now this is getting in the weeds here.
[00:17:30] But in...
[00:17:31] Go ahead.
[00:17:32] Okay, what I'll do is when I have an idea for a story, I do what it's called a design phase
[00:17:35] for me.
[00:17:36] I'll spend three, four, five years thinking about the book.
[00:17:40] And I'll fill notebooks by hand imagining everything that happens in the book, all the
[00:17:45] settings, all the characters, their backgrounds, their personalities, the key events and what
[00:17:50] they might mean, the tone of a work as a whole, some of the thematic elements, some
[00:17:56] of the poetic elements, some of the imagery.
[00:17:58] I'll do that for years by hand before I sit down and outline the book and begin chapter
[00:18:04] one.
[00:18:05] That's the design phase for me.
[00:18:06] Now during that, I'm beginning this process of building the individuals in my head.
[00:18:13] And this is pre maybe kind of establishing the vocabulary of the book.
[00:18:20] Yeah, that's right.
[00:18:21] And we'll begin to establish the vocabulary through this process because...
[00:18:25] And that's kind of my point.
[00:18:26] It's very for me and I think from many, it's very iterative.
[00:18:31] You know, people are listening but for you on screen, it's a spiral dynamic where
[00:18:37] so you start with this count, this figure, count where I stop and I say, okay, yeah,
[00:18:40] I think he's like this.
[00:18:42] I have a sense of him.
[00:18:44] And now I'm beginning to invent events that he's going to go through.
[00:18:48] So I'm imagining the events and I see him in the event and maybe there's an encounter
[00:18:53] and now while I'm beginning to think about the encounter, imagining it, even writing
[00:18:56] about it, what will happen is I'll say, wait a second, he wouldn't do that, he'd do this,
[00:19:02] right?
[00:19:03] And the important underlying concept here is that if you think of us as human beings,
[00:19:09] the people you know, occasionally there's a shy person, occasionally there's a mean
[00:19:14] person.
[00:19:15] But mostly we are all shy under some circumstance.
[00:19:19] We are bold under a different circumstance.
[00:19:21] We are mean under some circumstance.
[00:19:23] We are charitable under a different circumstance.
[00:19:25] We have the capacity to be all these things and different circumstances bring these traits,
[00:19:31] these human traits to the surface and it's all within the same personality, right?
[00:19:35] We have a lot of contradictory behavior in the expression of the individual and life
[00:19:42] in life.
[00:19:43] So as you're imagining, you start maybe with a relatively two-dimensional sense of a character.
[00:19:48] You start to imagine in an circumstance, your instincts say, wait a second, this guy
[00:19:52] wouldn't do A, he'd do B, which is kind of contradictory but that's right.
[00:19:58] And now I understand him better.
[00:20:00] So you say, okay let's go back to the beginning because now I have a richer sense of who
[00:20:02] he is.
[00:20:03] So let's start again.
[00:20:04] So this happens, okay, they none of this happens and he does that.
[00:20:07] And now he moves forward and now he's made this relationship in that relationship and
[00:20:11] another event occurs.
[00:20:12] Again, you go through a moment of discovery because when he's the this person, a new aspect
[00:20:18] of his personality expresses itself.
[00:20:20] So again, you got to go back to the beginning a little bit because now I have an even
[00:20:24] richer sense of who he is.
[00:20:26] And so you do this and each time I'm moving forward in the story, you're kind of rewinding
[00:20:31] and getting a more and more intricate sense, not only of him but of those he's encountering
[00:20:35] of the events, of what they might mean, of the settings.
[00:20:38] All of the elements are being revised through getting a keener and keener sense of what
[00:20:45] is happening in the moment, right?
[00:20:48] As through the imaginative process.
[00:20:50] And as a result of this, if you do it enough, suddenly you end up hopefully with a character
[00:20:55] who is more three-dimensional than if I wrote three character traits down on a piece
[00:20:59] of paper and said, that's the guy.
[00:21:02] And which would not really be, which would be a kind of flat individual at the end of
[00:21:06] the day.
[00:21:07] And so here's another thing which you pointed to which you may, which may interest you.
[00:21:11] But anyway, I do all this work, right?
[00:21:15] And I've even written some paragraphs, an opening paragraphs and some scenes or whatever.
[00:21:20] When I sit down to write the novel itself, that's when you really have to start to pin
[00:21:25] down what exactly is going to be the language.
[00:21:29] Now I may have versions of it in my mind.
[00:21:30] I may have already, you know, paragraphs that I've written that seem like they're on the
[00:21:33] right track.
[00:21:34] But once I'm writing the book, there's no more exploration.
[00:21:36] I got to start to commit to what it's going to sound like.
[00:21:40] And so in the writing of the first chapter, this has happened with me every book.
[00:21:45] What ends up happening after all these years of thought?
[00:21:48] Now that, you know, I'm writing chapter one, there will often be or tend to be a sentence
[00:21:56] or two where it comes finally into sharper focus for me.
[00:22:00] And I can tell you exactly what the sentences were in a gentleman, Moscow.
[00:22:04] Tell me.
[00:22:05] It opens with the trial, which is the transcript.
[00:22:09] He then gets marched on page one out of the trial, into the, cross the red square and
[00:22:14] into the hotel by two members of the red guard.
[00:22:18] And he's approaching the staircase in the lobby.
[00:22:22] And so I know all this is going to happen.
[00:22:24] I just haven't written it out yet.
[00:22:26] So he's approaching the staircase and he stops.
[00:22:30] Then he turns to the two red guards and he says, gentlemen, the lift are the stairs.
[00:22:36] And they don't know what to do.
[00:22:38] They're looking at each other.
[00:22:39] And he thinks to himself, how can you be expected to succeed on the field of battle if
[00:22:43] you can't make a decision between whether to take the lift or the stairs?
[00:22:47] So he chooses the stairs on their behalf.
[00:22:50] And then he takes the steps, two steps at a time.
[00:22:53] Two steps at a time as it has been, is have it since the academy?
[00:22:57] And I remember that little coming out really fast.
[00:23:00] And now in that little two or three sentences, I know so much now about the count and what
[00:23:07] this narrative is going to sound like.
[00:23:09] The concept that he would stop and ask his oppressors, which one are we going to do with
[00:23:14] the lift or the stairs?
[00:23:15] Sort of a sort of funny sort of gentlemanly sort of thing to do under the circumstances.
[00:23:21] The highfalutin sort of self-important thought he has.
[00:23:25] How can you succeed in the field of battle if you can't make a decision between the lift
[00:23:29] or the stairs?
[00:23:30] And then that thing, he takes the stairs two steps at a time as it had been, is have it
[00:23:35] since the academy.
[00:23:36] That's the guy, right?
[00:23:39] And so when I had a sentence like that, I had a period and I'm like, okay, that is suddenly
[00:23:45] I know it for what it is.
[00:23:46] It's like a pole star.
[00:23:48] He said, as I'm moving forward, this is the starting place of this individual.
[00:23:54] I know a lot about him.
[00:23:55] I know a lot's going to happen to him.
[00:23:56] I know what's happened to him in the past.
[00:23:58] But now I really beginning to hear what describing the world through his eyes it sounds
[00:24:03] like.
[00:24:04] And that then you're using that as the basis to start to unfold the story.
[00:24:10] Now, of course he's evolving, the world's evolving so that has to change too.
[00:24:14] The tone of the book changes, the sentiments that he's going to have change.
[00:24:19] But that's the powerful starting point for it.
[00:24:22] It's interesting because by that point when you write that sentence, you already know
[00:24:27] because of the years of work before it.
[00:24:29] You already know everything about him.
[00:24:33] He's an aristocrat, he's in this Bolshevik transition and so he's going to have to
[00:24:41] learn to deal with that.
[00:24:43] And obviously he will because the whole novel he survives, I mean, or at least he has to
[00:24:48] make a novel live for the whole several hundred pages.
[00:24:56] But what did you specifically learn about him once you write down and he says that sentence?
[00:25:02] It's not so much...
[00:25:05] Well, it's not so much that I'm learning something about his personality or his background
[00:25:09] or what's going to happen.
[00:25:10] It's more, I'm learning what writing about him should sound like.
[00:25:17] And so now, the gentleman Moscow is in the third person but it's not an omniscient third
[00:25:21] person.
[00:25:22] So it's not like a Henry James narrator who knows all what's happened in the past, what
[00:25:27] will happen in the future, what is the interior lives of all the characters.
[00:25:30] It's not that, right?
[00:25:31] The narrator of a gentleman Moscow, most of the book, is in third person but is clearly
[00:25:37] a close representation of the counts point of view.
[00:25:41] His sentiment, his sense of humor, his sense of what is important.
[00:25:46] It's influenced by his emotional past, it's his vocabulary and semantics.
[00:25:51] So that's a big challenge and if you're in a right like that, you have to begin to hear
[00:25:58] that.
[00:25:59] You have to hear in a narrator who is an expression of the counts inner life, his personality,
[00:26:05] his experiences, his vocabulary.
[00:26:07] What in fact would that sound like?
[00:26:09] Now if you're looking at a book of mine like The Lincoln Highway where there's eight different
[00:26:13] perspectives in that book, you have to do that eight different times because when you
[00:26:18] shift from hearing an Emmett chapter to a Duchess chapter or a Willie chapter, the language
[00:26:24] of those chapters is changing.
[00:26:26] The vocabulary is changing how poetic they are, how practical they are, how blunt they
[00:26:31] are.
[00:26:32] And there's a linguistic implication for all those aspects of personality.
[00:26:37] And you don't sit there and say he was blunt, what you do is in the way that you're describing
[00:26:43] the world through that character's eyes, there's a bluntness to that, to the language
[00:26:46] that you're using.
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[00:28:06] I think you never say something like he was blunt.
[00:28:11] You're always giving him blunt ways to say something or not.
[00:28:15] And not blunt ways to say something.
[00:28:17] I mean, I could almost open to any, happen to be open to one page right here just by
[00:28:22] coincidence, he's sowing with side by side with Marina who's one of those few characters
[00:28:30] who is blunt with him.
[00:28:33] And licking the thread and closing an eye just as Marina had taught him the count, thread
[00:28:40] of the needle faster than saints enter the gates of heaven, forming a double loop, tying
[00:28:46] off and not and snipping the thread from the pool.
[00:28:50] And on and on, there's very, you seem to know a lot of things.
[00:28:56] You know how to describe sowing and then metaphors to use so it's not just he's sowing fast.
[00:29:06] And then there was, here's a paragraph.
[00:29:10] He's putting eating a spoon of honey from his hometown basically.
[00:29:21] So dutifully the count put the spoon in his mouth and in an instant there was a familiar
[00:29:25] sweetness of fresh honey, sun like golden gay.
[00:29:29] Given the time of year the count was expecting this first impression we followed by a hint
[00:29:32] of lilacs from the Alexander Gardens or Chessie blossoms, Cherry blossoms from the golden
[00:29:38] ring.
[00:29:39] But as the Alexa dissolved in his tongue the count becomes aware of something else entirely
[00:29:43] rather than the flowering trees of central Moscow, the honey had a hint of grassy river bank
[00:29:48] and on and on until you get to the other stuff.
[00:29:52] And it's you seem to have a lot of knowledge about a lot of things that you bring into
[00:29:58] this character.
[00:30:00] Like just everything about the wines, music, the literature he's read.
[00:30:05] I think when you're describing the barber, the exact dances that the Cossacks did and using
[00:30:12] that to describe how his fingers are dancing over his head with the clippers.
[00:30:18] It's more than just research for this character somehow.
[00:30:22] And I'll say it bluntly like you're really smart somehow.
[00:30:27] And it shows up in these pages in the way you describe things.
[00:30:30] Or do you just research everything about the settings for this character?
[00:30:35] I'm not really a research driven writer so I don't tend to research my work.
[00:30:39] But what I do is I write about things that as you say, I feel very comfortable with
[00:30:46] a depth of knowledge already.
[00:30:48] So I had fallen in love with the Russian novel when I was 17 or 18 and I read Dostoyevsky
[00:30:56] or read Gogol and Turgendiev and Chekhov.
[00:30:59] And then I began to read the 20th century Russian figures before the revolution and then
[00:31:05] after the revolution.
[00:31:07] So by the time I was writing a gentleman Moscow, I had more than 30 years of being a fan
[00:31:14] as it were Russian culture and having immersed myself in narratives and by the different
[00:31:19] Russian masters and knowing something about the art and political landscape of Russia and
[00:31:25] how it changed.
[00:31:26] So I know that because I was a fan in a way and that's why I was willing to set the book
[00:31:31] in Russia.
[00:31:32] I could have told the exact same story in under the dictatorship in South America, let's
[00:31:36] say.
[00:31:37] I could do it in China to set it today in China where there are still artists under house
[00:31:41] arrest.
[00:31:43] But I wouldn't have done that because I don't have that decades of granular familiarity with
[00:31:50] those environments that I had with Russia.
[00:31:53] And so it was sort of a good place to draw from.
[00:31:58] My instincts are, as you're trying to find the right image or find the right reference
[00:32:06] to fit into an narrative like you're talking about, like the scissors being similar to
[00:32:11] the dancing of the massacre, what have you?
[00:32:13] If it doesn't come from a place of deeper knowledge or familiarity, it's not going to
[00:32:22] sound right.
[00:32:23] I mean, if I googled, what would be this and then plop it in, it's going to feel that
[00:32:29] way to the reader.
[00:32:30] It's something about it.
[00:32:31] It doesn't feel quite organic enough.
[00:32:34] And so I'm wary about, as part of the reason I'm wary about research is that it's hard
[00:32:39] once you're doing it to sense as the writer, where did I just put in something that's
[00:32:44] going to sound inorganic?
[00:32:48] Because it's right, but it may not sound organic to the reader in a way that,
[00:32:53] the genuine expression would.
[00:32:55] And so I do try to draw on stuff I know.
[00:32:59] Now, I think writers are like this.
[00:33:04] We read a lot.
[00:33:05] We're observing the world with intent.
[00:33:09] And so it doesn't mean that we're smarter than anybody, but we're taking in weird things.
[00:33:19] The kinds of language are very interesting to writers.
[00:33:23] And so you read a legal brief and you're like, oh, that's interesting.
[00:33:28] Why do they, that's how they construct sentences in the legal brief?
[00:33:32] That's the tone of it.
[00:33:34] That's the pace of it.
[00:33:35] That's the way they make a point.
[00:33:37] This is what's missing.
[00:33:38] What are all these things?
[00:33:39] Where are all that stuff?
[00:33:40] And then you see a politician in the south and you hear him talking.
[00:33:47] And you're like, oh, that's wow.
[00:33:48] That's to hear that southern oratory.
[00:33:52] That's its own thing.
[00:33:53] And then you hear a technical person.
[00:33:56] And you're like, oh, that's what technical language sounds like.
[00:33:59] So every time you hear that, you're absorbing a little bit of it.
[00:34:03] And if I had to write a southern political speech,
[00:34:07] those are the elements that would sort of be keynotes
[00:34:11] to help me start to craft something that made it seem authentic.
[00:34:16] But you can kind of, many Americans wouldn't
[00:34:19] necessarily remember it or think about it in those terms.
[00:34:21] But when you're a writer, that's what you are listening to and listening for.
[00:34:25] And that gives you a little bit more facility
[00:34:27] and using a different type of language
[00:34:30] that's not yours to bring to life a person who you are not.
[00:34:35] And I think there's two other things that are helping you
[00:34:39] with constructing the language in this.
[00:34:42] Is that A, you've spent all this time creating the story
[00:34:47] without thinking about language.
[00:34:48] And you've spent all this, you've spent all this
[00:34:50] on thinking about the character so that when you're finally writing
[00:34:52] the book, it's almost as if you've outsourced plot and
[00:34:56] character to your prior self from the past two, three years,
[00:35:01] whatever it was.
[00:35:02] And so you can focus on then layering in this language
[00:35:06] as opposed to like, and it's a legitimate thing
[00:35:08] like many writers write their first draft
[00:35:10] from beginning to end and then start working it out.
[00:35:13] But you can't really have the depth of language
[00:35:17] if you write in that linear fashion,
[00:35:19] you have to be a little maybe perhaps a little bit more cliffhanger
[00:35:22] focused like, yeah.
[00:35:23] Okay, I'm ending a chapter, what's the cliffhanger
[00:35:26] and then I drive into the next chapter.
[00:35:27] And there's nothing wrong with either approach
[00:35:29] but I just, I really appreciated it in your novels
[00:35:32] because you could see that now that you explain how you layered it,
[00:35:36] it makes sense like, because I was wondering
[00:35:39] how is he just weaving these,
[00:35:43] like each paragraph's like a poem the way
[00:35:45] you're writing these characters.
[00:35:47] It's really amazing.
[00:35:49] James, I really appreciate that question
[00:35:51] because you're absolutely right
[00:35:52] and it's one of things, I talk about planning and outlining
[00:35:57] and all these things and it may sound very,
[00:36:01] oh, you know, it's scientific or whatever
[00:36:03] but you're absolutely right.
[00:36:05] There's a counterintuitive aspect there
[00:36:06] which is that I do all that just as you describe
[00:36:10] so that when I get to the writing of a chapter,
[00:36:13] all the decisions are made and I can free up
[00:36:17] the most poetic part of myself
[00:36:19] to do the actual crafting of the sentences
[00:36:21] and the final imagining of imagery, et cetera.
[00:36:24] And to put it in technical, you know, modern science
[00:36:29] by planning, I'm trying to diminish the influence
[00:36:32] of the left side of my brain
[00:36:34] which is the decision making logical portion
[00:36:37] and to free up the right side of the brain
[00:36:39] which is subconscious and poetic and dream,
[00:36:41] you know, where that originates.
[00:36:42] And whereas as it just like you said,
[00:36:44] if I did not do the planning when I got to the chapter
[00:36:47] and you're sitting there having to say,
[00:36:48] okay, well what happens?
[00:36:49] And what does the room look like?
[00:36:50] And who's this guy comes through the door?
[00:36:52] What's his name?
[00:36:53] We know, what did he do yesterday?
[00:36:54] You know, what does he want?
[00:36:55] What are they saying to each other?
[00:36:57] That suddenly this decision making part of the mind
[00:37:01] which takes over and it can overwhelm the other side
[00:37:05] which is one you want to rule the day
[00:37:07] in the crafting of sentences.
[00:37:09] You want the poetic side to sort of surprise you
[00:37:12] with the word choice, surprise you with the image
[00:37:15] with come up with a parallel
[00:37:16] that you had never thought of before.
[00:37:18] And that can be, when the subconscious is really kicking
[00:37:23] it can be very powerful.
[00:37:25] You know, a good example I think in the general
[00:37:27] Moscow is when the count, there's a big turning point
[00:37:35] in the early part of the book.
[00:37:35] I needed something to happen
[00:37:37] which would make him really depressed
[00:37:39] or feel like his time was over basically.
[00:37:41] And after, during the design phase
[00:37:43] after trying many different things eventually
[00:37:45] I'm like, oh I know he's gonna go to dinner
[00:37:48] at the fancy restaurant and he's gonna ask for
[00:37:50] a fancy bottle of wine
[00:37:51] and they're gonna tell him that there's only red and white wine
[00:37:53] now and he's gonna be what?
[00:37:55] And they're gonna take him down the matriety's
[00:37:57] and take him down to the wine cellar
[00:37:58] and they'll have removed, the Bolsheviks will have removed
[00:38:00] all the wine labels from all the bottles
[00:38:03] arguing that this old sort of prestige type of wine drinking
[00:38:09] was really out of step with commoners.
[00:38:11] And of course it's the straw that breaks the candles
[00:38:16] back for him at that moment.
[00:38:18] And now I know this in the planning and stage
[00:38:21] I've figured this out and this design
[00:38:22] and I kind of even have this image
[00:38:24] that he's gonna arrive into the cellar
[00:38:25] with Andre, the matriety and he's gonna walk the aisles.
[00:38:29] And what he'll do is he'll go down into a, you know
[00:38:33] one of the rows of wine bottles
[00:38:35] and take one of the wine bottles in his hand
[00:38:38] like Hamlet holding the head of York, the skull of York
[00:38:41] and he'll say he'll reflect.
[00:38:44] And when I'm doing the design I'm like, oh yeah
[00:38:47] and he'll reflect, like I don't need to know
[00:38:49] at that point what he's gonna say.
[00:38:51] I'll figure that out later.
[00:38:53] So when I'm doing the actual writing
[00:38:56] and everything's planned and imagined in advance
[00:38:59] so that I'm now just doing the poetry of that scene
[00:39:01] when I got to that moment where he took the bottle in hand,
[00:39:06] everything that gets follows that came really fast
[00:39:09] in the moment as I was, I am imagining myself
[00:39:13] as the person I am not the count
[00:39:15] in a situation I have never been
[00:39:18] and the count suddenly takes over
[00:39:19] and he's like, his observation in that moment is
[00:39:25] that the wine is the perfect distillation of individuality.
[00:39:28] And we know that this is the way that wine works, right?
[00:39:31] That wine, the flavor of a wine is totally determined
[00:39:36] by the 50 square feet in which it's grown
[00:39:40] or 100 square feet because of the minerality of that soul,
[00:39:44] the slope of it, the altitude of it,
[00:39:46] its exposure to sun on average,
[00:39:49] its exposure to wind and cold,
[00:39:51] all those things are what define the flavor
[00:39:53] and that changes like every 10 yards
[00:39:57] to some degree.
[00:39:58] I was wondering even when you wrote that
[00:40:01] and I remember that it seemed perfectly well
[00:40:03] and there's a couple of interesting things about that scene
[00:40:07] but with that line that you specifically are referring to,
[00:40:12] how did you know that?
[00:40:13] Like I don't know anything about wine for instance
[00:40:15] so you must know about wine.
[00:40:17] And again, in this sort of catalog of writerly stuff
[00:40:20] so like someone at some point just you go to a vineyard
[00:40:24] in Napa Valley for the first time of your life
[00:40:26] and the guy says that and you're like,
[00:40:27] oh that's interesting, that gets stowed away deeply
[00:40:30] because it's sort of like,
[00:40:31] oh that's an intricate way in which nature works.
[00:40:34] Wow I didn't know that but you don't know.
[00:40:36] I didn't, when I learned that,
[00:40:38] I didn't think how am I gonna use that
[00:40:39] you know what I mean?
[00:40:40] It just got logged away
[00:40:42] and then so as you say in the subconscious
[00:40:43] it suddenly presents itself
[00:40:45] and you're like, oh yeah this is perfect
[00:40:46] it's a perfect sort of beautiful speech
[00:40:48] that the count is gonna give to himself
[00:40:51] about the tragedy of this,
[00:40:53] is that wine is this unique thing
[00:40:54] and when you remove all the labels
[00:40:56] it's as if it's such drops in the ocean.
[00:40:58] But the added thing was that as I was finishing
[00:41:02] the count speech and I hit the final period
[00:41:05] I was suddenly like, you know,
[00:41:06] I was like well done count
[00:41:07] that was a beautiful little observation.
[00:41:09] And then I also'm like wait a second
[00:41:12] the count's description of the wine
[00:41:16] and what's happened to it?
[00:41:17] You know that this unique individuality of the wine
[00:41:20] and then the removal of the labels
[00:41:21] which treats it as if it's a drop in the ocean.
[00:41:24] It's exactly what was happening
[00:41:25] in the Soviet experience to people, right?
[00:41:29] That's what happened in the Soviet experiment
[00:41:32] is that the individuality of humans was diminished
[00:41:35] in favor of some sort of universal idea
[00:41:38] and they had been,
[00:41:39] so then you're like at some deep subconscious level
[00:41:42] not only did my brain pull out this wine metaphor
[00:41:45] as you say,
[00:41:46] because it's a nice poetic moment for the count
[00:41:49] but it did it in a way that actually
[00:41:51] it resonates with the overall theme of a whole friggin' book.
[00:41:54] And I could never plan that,
[00:41:56] I could never plan that.
[00:41:57] Right and that was what was so beautiful
[00:41:58] comparing that to the client and individuality.
[00:42:02] Okay, so let's talk about the question.
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[00:42:20] They are?
[00:42:21] Thanks.
[00:42:22] That's my first time buying.
[00:42:24] So I think it's time to go out and get some
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[00:42:29] They are?
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[00:43:21] I don't wanna give away any spoilers for the book
[00:43:22] and also for the series coming up.
[00:43:24] So let me try to do this in a way
[00:43:26] that doesn't give away any spoilers.
[00:43:28] It's not really an spoiler anyway,
[00:43:29] but the person who first confronts him
[00:43:34] with the question of red or white
[00:43:37] and in such a way that it becomes confusing to the count
[00:43:40] because it doesn't have all this subtlety anymore.
[00:43:45] That's like the one character that count sees
[00:43:48] in almost a two-dimensional way.
[00:43:50] You refer to this as I'm third person,
[00:43:53] not third person I'm mission,
[00:43:54] but third person from the count's point of view.
[00:43:56] This is the one character we don't really get a sense
[00:44:00] maybe of who his parents were.
[00:44:02] Yeah, that's right.
[00:44:03] Did you do that on purpose?
[00:44:04] Because that's also how the count is seeing
[00:44:06] and whereas with everybody else,
[00:44:07] the count tries to bring out the best in people.
[00:44:09] Yeah, he's kind of a nemesis.
[00:44:11] And actually one of my favorite moments of the book,
[00:44:15] a favorite moment is, and again,
[00:44:17] no, we won't give anything away,
[00:44:18] but late in the very late in the book,
[00:44:21] like in the final 50 pages,
[00:44:23] the count and that figure have a confrontation.
[00:44:27] And for the first time,
[00:44:30] that figure describes in some detail how he sees the count
[00:44:35] and it's sort of the root of his animosity towards the count.
[00:44:40] And the count is taken aback
[00:44:42] and he's sort of like, oh my God, listen to that.
[00:44:47] Because I think you're right.
[00:44:49] I didn't think of it consciously but self-consciously
[00:44:53] I think you're right,
[00:44:54] that the limited description of that antagonistic figure
[00:44:59] was really an extension of the count
[00:45:01] being somewhat dismissive of him.
[00:45:03] And so what I like about this moment
[00:45:05] is that it's sort of like the count realizing,
[00:45:07] oh yeah, right, this guy's got this whole,
[00:45:11] he's got his own viewpoint, his own background
[00:45:13] and his own thing which is informed
[00:45:16] why he's been doing what he's doing.
[00:45:17] It's not just a jerk,
[00:45:20] that there's this other thing behind it.
[00:45:23] And I would say that,
[00:45:25] so I think in the case of it,
[00:45:26] and that's the bishop as the character,
[00:45:28] I think that that's what happened there.
[00:45:30] But this kind of brings up an interesting bigger point
[00:45:32] which is that I'll write a first draft
[00:45:35] and then the revision process is quite active for me.
[00:45:39] So the second draft, I will change,
[00:45:44] there's not a page in the second draft
[00:45:46] that has not been changed
[00:45:47] but there may be as much as a quarter of the book
[00:45:50] that I remove and an additional 25%
[00:45:53] that I'm putting back in that's brand new, right?
[00:45:56] And the removal is about economy.
[00:45:59] I'm taking the first draft and I'm saying, okay,
[00:46:02] this chapter goes on too long,
[00:46:04] this paragraph is redundant,
[00:46:05] this character, this scene is a replay of the other scene,
[00:46:10] it should be one scene
[00:46:11] and we'll combine the two concepts.
[00:46:13] Well, you're constantly sort of looking for better economy
[00:46:16] and shrinking the text to make it,
[00:46:20] the same amount of energy and thematic power in it
[00:46:24] but with fewer and fewer words in essence.
[00:46:26] And sometimes that means there's a whole removal
[00:46:28] of a chapter, the removal of an entire character,
[00:46:31] the removal of the first 40 pages.
[00:46:33] Mostly challenging for you
[00:46:34] because you probably have to kill
[00:46:36] as they say many darlings because the pros is beautiful.
[00:46:40] I don't, yeah, right.
[00:46:42] And so like that phrase kind of drives me crazy
[00:46:45] so I'm not trying to say it about you.
[00:46:47] But like I said, right,
[00:46:48] so you gotta be willing to kill your darlings.
[00:46:50] Well, that's kind of true
[00:46:51] but I could general and maskeh would not succeed
[00:46:53] if it didn't have my darlings on every page.
[00:46:56] So you're killing a few.
[00:46:58] But yes, you have to get used to as an editor
[00:47:01] being objective and cold-hearted and being triad.
[00:47:04] Kill it and see now take a step back, read it fresh
[00:47:08] and be like oh yeah, you know what?
[00:47:09] It works better if I just throw all that out.
[00:47:12] And it's a better experience for the reader.
[00:47:13] I was explaining too much to the reader.
[00:47:15] I was giving them too much information.
[00:47:17] The reader, which diminishes,
[00:47:19] that's a paradox of writing,
[00:47:21] the more I describe the character or the situation,
[00:47:24] the less alive it's becoming, right?
[00:47:26] So you gotta pair that down to its bare bones
[00:47:29] where the electricity is and then for the reader
[00:47:31] it's got a, you know, it feels a lot, right?
[00:47:34] So that's the first part of the editing
[00:47:36] of the first draft.
[00:47:37] Take it down.
[00:47:38] Then you start to say wouldn't it be interesting
[00:47:39] actually if this element was added?
[00:47:41] If this was added.
[00:47:42] Now one of the big things that gets added in draft two,
[00:47:46] is that in draft one,
[00:47:50] I have over described the three or four principal characters.
[00:47:55] There's too much about them,
[00:47:57] about what they think, what they feel,
[00:47:59] what they've done, what's happened to them,
[00:48:00] what's gonna happen to them?
[00:48:01] You know, and the secondary characters
[00:48:04] are not as fully realized as they should be.
[00:48:06] So through the economy thing,
[00:48:08] I'm shrinking the amount of material
[00:48:10] dedicated to those four leading characters,
[00:48:13] but they're actually becoming more brightly
[00:48:15] and sharply drawn that frees up space.
[00:48:19] And I can use that to start doing justice
[00:48:21] to these secondary characters.
[00:48:23] And where we're, you know,
[00:48:24] and it's almost a nagging thing like,
[00:48:26] you know, they'll say, oh yeah, I'll say,
[00:48:28] you know, like Marina in the first draft,
[00:48:31] Marina, the seamstress,
[00:48:32] plays a smaller role,
[00:48:34] much smaller role than the second draft.
[00:48:35] And I love her and I love her personality.
[00:48:38] And she, as you said,
[00:48:39] she's the one who's blunt to the count.
[00:48:41] And so that's a very powerful thing
[00:48:44] to bring into the story.
[00:48:45] And so like, from draft one to draft two,
[00:48:48] probably the word count for Marina double
[00:48:51] or something like that.
[00:48:52] You know?
[00:48:52] So you have this kind of thing where on the one hand,
[00:48:54] you're going on the draft,
[00:48:55] you're diminishing the amount of language
[00:48:56] to these characters to make them better rendered
[00:48:59] and you're adding, you know, words to these other characters
[00:49:03] to bring them into better life.
[00:49:04] And so, and you're right,
[00:49:07] the bishop is kind of a funny case
[00:49:08] because of the counts prejudices towards him
[00:49:12] that I never really give him what he's do
[00:49:15] until that sort of that final confrontation.
[00:49:17] And even then, he sort of gets short-changed.
[00:49:20] Well, well, but it's interesting.
[00:49:22] And I know we're spending a lot of time
[00:49:24] on gentlemen in Moscow.
[00:49:26] I want to talk about the rules of civility
[00:49:27] and of course table for two, which is being released.
[00:49:30] But look, gentlemen in Moscow again
[00:49:31] is going to be a Netflix series in a few days.
[00:49:33] So, not Netflix.
[00:49:35] Not Netflix.
[00:49:36] Oh, not Netflix.
[00:49:37] Paramot Flux.
[00:49:38] Sure, I know that.
[00:49:39] I've seen the trailer on YouTube
[00:49:40] but I didn't know what network was on.
[00:49:47] You know, one thing I was curious about
[00:49:50] was the character of Mishka.
[00:49:54] You know, you mentioned this is again,
[00:49:55] third person in the point of view of the count.
[00:50:00] But there is one point when I was just curious about this,
[00:50:05] there is one point where it seems like it's actually Mishka's
[00:50:08] point of view for the only time in the novel.
[00:50:10] And I wondered if you did that intentionally.
[00:50:13] Yes, so...
[00:50:15] And there's only one page.
[00:50:16] Yeah, like 90% of the book, as I say,
[00:50:18] is from this counts perspective.
[00:50:21] But what you...
[00:50:22] There's a secondary narrator who plays a major role
[00:50:26] in the overall experience of the book.
[00:50:28] And that narrator appears initially in footnotes,
[00:50:32] sort of stepping in and making observations.
[00:50:35] Then that narrator often opens major chapters to orient you.
[00:50:39] What's happened during the Second World War?
[00:50:41] What's happened during the Purges?
[00:50:43] There are addendums at the end of chapters
[00:50:46] where you leave the hotel
[00:50:48] and you follow Nina into the countryside
[00:50:50] or Andre home to where his son has died
[00:50:53] during the Second World War.
[00:50:54] And it's sort of those are being given by this other narrator.
[00:50:59] And as you say, one of them is Mishka
[00:51:01] walking on the way to the hotel after doing time
[00:51:06] and sort of beginning to see Russia
[00:51:09] from his new sort of jaded, hard-hearted point of view.
[00:51:14] And so, yes, so there's these sort of...
[00:51:18] So it's not...
[00:51:19] It's that other 10%.
[00:51:20] And this is again, it's one of those things like...
[00:51:22] Without that 10% it would be a vastly weaker book.
[00:51:27] The 10% punches way over its weight
[00:51:29] because it gives you this counterbalance
[00:51:33] to the counts optimism,
[00:51:34] to the limitations of what he sees,
[00:51:36] to his natural good nature towards others,
[00:51:41] to the centric quality of the story from his point of view.
[00:51:45] These sort of are beginning to show you
[00:51:47] what's going on outside the hotel.
[00:51:48] What are the challenges people are facing?
[00:51:51] What is the other kind of version
[00:51:53] of witnessing those events, either darkly or sarcastically
[00:51:57] or cynically through an experience of disappointment?
[00:52:01] And so you get this kind of thing.
[00:52:03] And with Mishka we see it when he goes
[00:52:07] and fights with his editor over the check-up story.
[00:52:10] We kind of follow him into this meeting
[00:52:12] where he has a confrontation.
[00:52:14] And so...
[00:52:15] I don't...
[00:52:17] There is no...
[00:52:19] You know, like I feel like...
[00:52:23] Part of the pleasures of reading over time
[00:52:25] is you realize that it would be very easy for an instructor
[00:52:29] to say, oh well when you've chosen the narrator
[00:52:31] that should be the narrator.
[00:52:32] And if it's from the count, the count wasn't there,
[00:52:34] then we shouldn't see that.
[00:52:35] How can we suddenly shift and hear it
[00:52:37] from somebody else's point of view for one page without...
[00:52:40] But when we read books for that happens
[00:52:42] you're like, oh, you can do that.
[00:52:44] If you do it well, you could do it.
[00:52:48] Every rule I guess is made to be broken.
[00:52:50] You just have to be careful because it's a risk.
[00:52:53] Yeah, you have to be judicious about when
[00:52:56] and how you do it.
[00:52:57] And again, I've kind of said it has to be the kind of thing
[00:53:00] where the break allows this one page
[00:53:04] to have big emotional or intellectual impact
[00:53:08] for the reader, you know, where it's not just random.
[00:53:13] It really is something that...
[00:53:16] It deserves to be told in that different way at that moment.
[00:53:19] It's so interesting because now that you describe it this way,
[00:53:22] again like you mentioned the footnotes,
[00:53:24] the footnotes were a great way
[00:53:26] to make it almost a third person omniscient
[00:53:30] because the footnotes are very passive.
[00:53:32] It's like the footnotes of any book.
[00:53:35] It's just like, oh by the way we have a little more explanation here.
[00:53:38] Here it is.
[00:53:39] Don't worry about it.
[00:53:40] You just, you know, here's some facts that fill in the context.
[00:53:43] So it's almost a little more passive than the passionate point of view of the count.
[00:53:48] And then that's why it struck me that it was outside of the footnotes,
[00:53:51] the Mishka aspect.
[00:53:53] But at the same time Mishka is almost this weird counterpoint to the count.
[00:53:58] Like they're almost intertwined as two sides of one character in a weird way.
[00:54:02] Although Mishka plays a much smaller role.
[00:54:04] But that's why maybe you felt, okay I could take the risk with this compact
[00:54:09] with the reader because Mishka is the count in some way.
[00:54:14] Yeah and we deserve, because you're right.
[00:54:17] And you think about it thematically or historically actually.
[00:54:23] The revolution was there were many intellectuals
[00:54:29] and sort of members of the aristocracy or related to the other who were in favor of the revolution.
[00:54:35] Because like it's like many revolutions, it starts with the intelligentsia.
[00:54:39] It doesn't start with the peasants.
[00:54:41] It's a group of people who have been schooled, who have had access to things
[00:54:45] who are become morally outraged and who are writing the manifestos
[00:54:48] and begin printing out the leaflets.
[00:54:51] And so it wasn't uncommon for at that early stage
[00:54:57] to have two people who were basically had a very similar upbringing
[00:55:01] and may have been friends and quite close who were suddenly on opposite sides of history.
[00:55:08] And so Mishka is, you know, absolutely right, he's sort of a personification of that branch.
[00:55:14] Now that branch in Russian history as in many revolutionary histories
[00:55:21] walked in full of optimism, full of vision, full of confidence
[00:55:28] and ended up very disperited, disappointed, disillusioned.
[00:55:33] Because the revolution did not fulfill its promise in the way that they imagined it at the beginning.
[00:55:40] And so I wanted to have someone who was like that part of the Russian experience,
[00:55:46] that part of the experience in a moment of historical transition.
[00:55:51] And so you do get, it does become important to leave the count for a minute
[00:55:56] to sort of taste in a way the bitterness, the sense deep disappointment
[00:56:02] from the person who's like we're going to change the world and feel like it's going to happen
[00:56:07] in the first part of the book.
[00:56:09] And the second part of the book begins to get disillusioned.
[00:56:12] And finally, you know, is just completely broken by the disappointment
[00:56:19] Russia did not become what it could have become.
[00:56:22] And so it's important to have that as a separate thread, you know.
[00:56:26] And like Nina, who's a young girl and the count meets her,
[00:56:31] is again, it's like a different personification of an aspect of Russian history
[00:56:35] or revolutionary history anywhere, which is that she was born at the time
[00:56:38] of the revolution or basically shortly before us.
[00:56:41] She's like today's Gen Zs.
[00:56:43] Yes. She grew up with the internet.
[00:56:45] Yes, right. So everything's second nature to her.
[00:56:48] Of course we, you know, communism is great.
[00:56:53] Of course it's great.
[00:56:54] And of course it's the only way to be.
[00:56:55] Because that's what she's been schooled in.
[00:56:57] And so she has a different kind of optimism than the Mishka,
[00:57:01] who's the intelligentsia from the 19th century looking into the future.
[00:57:05] She's the one who's bought it, Huckline and Sinker,
[00:57:08] because she's a communist youth.
[00:57:11] But she's going to have a different, you know,
[00:57:13] they get disappointed in a different way.
[00:57:16] And may never completely.
[00:57:18] And even though they may be disappointed with the outcome,
[00:57:21] they may never turn their back on the party.
[00:57:24] You know, that kind of person, right?
[00:57:26] Who says, you know, my husband's doing time.
[00:57:29] But it's important for the revolution to make certain sacrifices
[00:57:33] towards this mission we're on.
[00:57:36] And that happened, right?
[00:57:37] These young people who adopted the mission so deeply,
[00:57:42] you know, there were the kids who turned in their parents
[00:57:44] and in Russia when things got hot.
[00:57:46] You know, and did it proudly, you know, it's crazy stuff.
[00:57:48] But so you're kind of...
[00:57:50] And so again, it becomes important to not only meet Nina,
[00:57:53] see her evolution, but then get a glimpse of her
[00:57:56] as she leaves the hotel and goes into adulthood
[00:57:58] and has to face kind of confront the realities of the Russia
[00:58:03] that she has admired since childhood.
[00:58:06] But what's great is she and many other characters
[00:58:10] exemplify this aspect of the story takes place in the hotel.
[00:58:17] It's like a painting of the hotel,
[00:58:20] but you get this sense that painting goes off.
[00:58:23] Like, you know, some paintings are just a portrait.
[00:58:26] You think that's the entire universe.
[00:58:28] It's just the portrait inside the painting.
[00:58:30] But some paintings, you know, Sunday in the park with George.
[00:58:32] There's things happening outside of the scene we're seeing.
[00:58:35] You just don't see them, the painting focus on this part.
[00:58:38] And so this is a painting in the Metropole,
[00:58:40] but Nina and other characters exemplify
[00:58:42] that there are things going on outside the Metropole.
[00:58:45] Sometimes we might find out what they are.
[00:58:47] Sometimes we'll never find out what they are.
[00:58:49] That's right.
[00:58:50] And that's part of the beauty of the book as well.
[00:58:51] And sometimes it's foreshadowed and sometimes it isn't.
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[01:00:11] This bridges me to the rules of civility,
[01:00:14] which is you're another,
[01:00:16] that was your first published novel.
[01:00:19] And it's like a mirror image of a gentleman in Moscow.
[01:00:24] It's about...
[01:00:27] By the way, I went into a thinking he was going to be about Eve.
[01:00:30] All about Eve because I had read even Hollywood first
[01:00:33] and I was like, oh my gosh,
[01:00:34] I'm going to read about where Eve came from.
[01:00:37] But it's this young lady who's rising up
[01:00:41] and wants to fit in in upper class Manhattan,
[01:00:47] wants to meet the love of her life in that class
[01:00:52] and have a dream life.
[01:00:55] But you get this sense in both books
[01:00:57] that one of the things you're really talking about
[01:01:00] is not only these kind of transitions
[01:01:03] and different stratus of society,
[01:01:06] but also the kind of roles we have to play.
[01:01:10] And this is very clear in both books.
[01:01:12] Like in Moscow, you have to pretend.
[01:01:16] Are you going to be the proletariat worker,
[01:01:19] Bolshevik administrator, or are you going to pretend
[01:01:22] to be someone who could fit into this class of society
[01:01:26] or are you going to be the actress
[01:01:28] who has to whine and die and pretend to be this
[01:01:31] in order to move from silent to talky.
[01:01:34] And everybody's playing like a role
[01:01:37] and in rules of civility too, very clearly,
[01:01:40] everyone is kind of not themselves.
[01:01:43] They're all playing roles.
[01:01:45] And this is what's true in real life too.
[01:01:47] We're all just playing roles most of the time.
[01:01:49] It's hard to really even know who you are,
[01:01:51] let alone be who you are.
[01:01:53] And I just wonder how conscious you were
[01:01:54] during writing the rules of civility of this aspect?
[01:01:59] I think generally you're right that appears often in my work
[01:02:03] because I find it very interesting,
[01:02:04] just in the way you describe it.
[01:02:06] I find it very interesting.
[01:02:10] In the United States there is in an upper class,
[01:02:13] a middle class, a lower class,
[01:02:14] or a working class, or whatever you want to say.
[01:02:16] There's like 70 classes.
[01:02:19] And that's true everywhere you go.
[01:02:21] There's incredible gradations between in the experience
[01:02:25] of life in this complicated society of America.
[01:02:31] And some of that is influenced by wealth
[01:02:34] and some of it by upbringing and some of it by race
[01:02:38] and some of it by gender and by job.
[01:02:40] All these things are affecting how we're seen by others,
[01:02:45] how we present ourselves,
[01:02:48] and there's aspects of integrity and self-deceit
[01:02:51] which are bound in that and that are choices
[01:02:53] or either made actively or passively.
[01:02:56] And so I find that, you know,
[01:02:58] that's an infinitely interesting set of circumstances for me.
[01:03:02] And so the rules of civility,
[01:03:04] which is only this year in the life of this of Katie in 1938
[01:03:08] and as you say it's the year she's 25,
[01:03:10] she's beginning to understand or see how she might advance
[01:03:14] both socially and professionally in Manhattan.
[01:03:18] And you don't get to see the completion of it,
[01:03:21] you just begin to see how okay,
[01:03:23] this is how this town works.
[01:03:24] And these are my opportunities for presenting themselves.
[01:03:27] But as she's navigating that,
[01:03:31] we're getting to sort of see,
[01:03:33] she's bumping into different of these tears
[01:03:36] and beginning to understand the nuances between them
[01:03:39] and the pluses and minuses around the choices
[01:03:43] that are made in order to participate
[01:03:45] or in order to win in that particular corner of New York life.
[01:03:50] So I do find that fun and interesting
[01:03:54] and timeless too.
[01:03:56] And then you see what the other characters like,
[01:03:59] okay, Tinker, who I can't say it sometimes is hard
[01:04:03] to talk about novels on a podcast
[01:04:05] because you really don't want,
[01:04:06] like a nonfiction book we could talk about everything.
[01:04:08] Yeah.
[01:04:09] Fiction obviously you can't.
[01:04:10] But this aspect of really how hard different people try
[01:04:14] to fit into different roles.
[01:04:16] And I can't give her even away the secret of the title.
[01:04:21] But then there's even the more conventional people in there.
[01:04:26] I'm forgetting the name of the guy.
[01:04:28] She dated for a short time who was younger.
[01:04:30] Dickie Van Awel.
[01:04:31] Yeah, yeah.
[01:04:32] Where you could clearly see he's playing his role.
[01:04:35] Even though it fits more naturally to him,
[01:04:37] he was born and grew up that way.
[01:04:39] But it's still a role for him.
[01:04:41] And he has to live up to it
[01:04:42] and whether he's good or not depends on his success
[01:04:45] at fitting into that role.
[01:04:47] Yeah.
[01:04:48] And it was, you know, rules of civility,
[01:04:51] I don't know if you made this comparison at all
[01:04:53] and for me this is a compliment.
[01:04:55] But it reminds me of Valley of the Dolls a little bit.
[01:04:58] Did you ever read Valley of the Dolls?
[01:04:59] I haven't known.
[01:05:00] So the 1960s novel, of course, was sold
[01:05:03] tens of millions of copies.
[01:05:04] Yeah.
[01:05:05] And it reminded me of that too,
[01:05:07] just kind of this array of young,
[01:05:10] for first starting with young women,
[01:05:12] but then array of the people they meet in New York
[01:05:14] as they're climbing in their 20s
[01:05:16] and what happens to them.
[01:05:17] And it's, again, beautiful in the same way
[01:05:22] that gentlemen in Moscow is just really going in depth
[01:05:25] and nobody's a cartoon.
[01:05:27] Even Dickie.
[01:05:29] At first I thought, is this going to be a cartoon
[01:05:31] and we're never going to see this guy again?
[01:05:33] But then you realize, OK, it goes more and more.
[01:05:35] And I'm avoiding talking about Tinker
[01:05:37] to talk about him, but it's the same thing.
[01:05:41] Yeah.
[01:05:42] And I love one of my favorite,
[01:05:43] I'll tell you two things about Tiki Vanderwyl,
[01:05:46] which I think you'll enjoy if you,
[01:05:48] not aware of it, but there's a scene there where,
[01:05:52] Dickie is romantic that he's very interested
[01:05:56] in the narrator, Katie.
[01:05:57] He's the love of her.
[01:05:59] And there's this other relationship
[01:06:01] that she's been interested in or whatever
[01:06:03] and they end up having a moment
[01:06:05] where he's been avoiding him
[01:06:07] and Tiki goes and finds her
[01:06:09] and they're sitting on the steps of St. Patrick's Cathedral
[01:06:11] in New York City.
[01:06:12] And he says, hey, what's going on?
[01:06:15] You know, you have an essence
[01:06:17] having an answer in my calls.
[01:06:18] So she confesses well,
[01:06:20] this is what's happened between me and this other man
[01:06:22] and where I was disappointed
[01:06:24] and in his behavior.
[01:06:26] And Dickie, what he should do at that moment
[01:06:31] is say, oh, what a cat,
[01:06:33] what a terrible behavior of that gentleman.
[01:06:36] Come back to my place.
[01:06:38] We'll have a glass of whiskey
[01:06:39] and let's put it behind us
[01:06:40] and we'll have a good time.
[01:06:41] That's what he should do.
[01:06:43] And I remember writing this.
[01:06:45] And I wasn't, as I was writing it,
[01:06:48] he was changing the course of what he was going to say.
[01:06:52] Because suddenly you're like, you know what?
[01:06:54] That's not he would never do that.
[01:06:56] And so instead, what he says is,
[01:06:58] who? You know, that's a tough one
[01:07:00] because that thing that you said about him
[01:07:02] actually I'm kind of impressed by that.
[01:07:04] And the other thing you say,
[01:07:05] why aren't we all kind of like that?
[01:07:06] So he kind of totally against his own interests
[01:07:10] kind of takes the side of the other guy.
[01:07:12] And it's a moment where I like it
[01:07:15] in the book because of what you're describing
[01:07:17] which is that as unique him,
[01:07:18] he's very carefree and devil-made-care.
[01:07:20] He doesn't seem to take anything seriously.
[01:07:22] And she even kind of likes that about him, you know?
[01:07:25] And he seems like a lightweight,
[01:07:27] a little, you know, to some degree.
[01:07:29] And this is a moment where he kind of turns the tables on her
[01:07:32] and you realize no, he's just like everybody else.
[01:07:34] He's more sophisticated than she's giving him credit for.
[01:07:37] And he's hit a made in observation
[01:07:40] which really, she has not been willing to accept.
[01:07:45] And it completely changes the way she sees the situation
[01:07:49] and you know, and I love that sort of this tender-hearted
[01:07:52] but revealing moment of Dickey.
[01:07:54] Well so here's the other thing I want to tell you.
[01:07:55] So then she says, you know,
[01:07:57] at some point we learned that Dickey ended up,
[01:08:00] all right, he kind of grows, you know,
[01:08:02] later on he's going to grow up in all right.
[01:08:03] Well do you know he appears in a gentleman Moscow, right?
[01:08:07] You know that?
[01:08:08] Oh my god.
[01:08:09] He's Richard Van der Wad.
[01:08:11] Oh my god.
[01:08:12] Right because Dickey is...
[01:08:14] He's Dickey in his 20s,
[01:08:16] but by then he's after the Second World War.
[01:08:18] That's almost like the American version of...
[01:08:21] You know, he's counterpoint to the count almost.
[01:08:24] Yes, but from America.
[01:08:26] And he has all the old personality traits.
[01:08:28] He's sitting in the bar, he's taking a dog in the bar tender,
[01:08:30] he's having a good time.
[01:08:31] But again, he in that book, he does the same thing.
[01:08:34] There's a moment which the count is very low
[01:08:36] and Dickey weighs in in this really interesting and thoughtful way.
[01:08:40] In a way that the count might do.
[01:08:42] Yeah, yeah exactly.
[01:08:43] Sonya so that's the same character.
[01:08:44] Yeah that's the same character.
[01:08:45] That is fascinating.
[01:08:47] I wanted to say one other thing about this sort of topic,
[01:08:49] which is that I was just with...
[01:08:52] Friends with Michael Lewis,
[01:08:54] he was just interviewing me at the New Orleans Book Festival last weekend.
[01:08:57] And well you know he spent a year following around Sam Bankman Fried
[01:09:04] with the intention of writing a book.
[01:09:07] And then just as he was about to begin writing,
[01:09:09] you know, S.B.F's entire thing world blows up, right?
[01:09:14] Crypto collapse, accusations of fraud.
[01:09:18] Well the thing I was going to point out is that what's interesting about it
[01:09:21] is that like seeing for those of you who are listeners who know S.B.F
[01:09:26] I'm sure you do just from the press.
[01:09:28] His whole thing of,
[01:09:30] I don't comb my hair or get it cut.
[01:09:32] I wear sweatpants.
[01:09:34] That's just as sort of targeted a costume
[01:09:40] as you know, Dickie Van der Waal in a tuxedo.
[01:09:43] Right?
[01:09:44] It's the same thing, right?
[01:09:45] He had his own version of it.
[01:09:47] And Michael's book and if you hear Michael speak about S.B.F.
[01:09:51] or if you read his, you know, terrific profile into the affinity book
[01:09:55] his last work of nonfiction,
[01:10:00] Sam I don't know him but S.B.F is kind of somewhere on the spectrum
[01:10:05] and he is not very good at reading emotional cues or giving emotional cues.
[01:10:10] And so as he's kind of rising,
[01:10:12] he's getting more and more success,
[01:10:14] he sort of thought, you know,
[01:10:16] I'm in his trade stuff in a dark room by myself
[01:10:19] and maybe I'll get rich but you know,
[01:10:21] I don't have to deal with people.
[01:10:23] But suddenly he becomes this public figure for cryptocurrency.
[01:10:28] He's worth more than $10 billion.
[01:10:31] People are seeking him out, investors, sovereigns, politicians.
[01:10:35] He starts donating money.
[01:10:37] So there's suddenly a public life is required of him
[01:10:40] that he has no training in and that he actually has avoided his entire life.
[01:10:45] And so what Michael talks about is that he starts to teach himself
[01:10:50] how to act in public.
[01:10:53] So he doesn't understand jokes,
[01:10:55] they doesn't find them funny,
[01:10:57] but he starts teaching himself to smile when someone tells a joke
[01:11:00] or to pretend to laugh.
[01:11:02] And he develops all these techniques, you know,
[01:11:05] to sort of not an interest or to be worried about the young woman who's working for him
[01:11:09] where he doesn't care at all, you know?
[01:11:11] But because it's not in his nature to emote in that way
[01:11:15] but it became essential to his behavior.
[01:11:17] So you have that and then, you know,
[01:11:19] then suddenly the guy gets arrested,
[01:11:21] loses all the money, gets arrested
[01:11:23] and now he's in a suit with his haircut, right?
[01:11:26] So we've gone into a new costume, right?
[01:11:28] Because if you were the sweats with the crazy hair, you know, to court,
[01:11:31] then he might be judged badly.
[01:11:33] So now he's got a whole nother...
[01:11:34] Anyway, so like I say, this is eternal stuff,
[01:11:37] you know, these ways in which we present ourselves
[01:11:41] and both in clothes, in behavior
[01:11:44] and in facial expressions,
[01:11:45] though the language we use,
[01:11:47] and it is loaded, it's targeted,
[01:11:51] it's both conscious and subconscious, and it shifts.
[01:11:55] But what's interesting though is I'm really aware of it in your books.
[01:12:00] I'm not necessarily aware of it in every novel I read,
[01:12:04] but perhaps because maybe in part your books are about this
[01:12:09] and the changing shifts of the roles, you know,
[01:12:12] the changing roles we play and how they shift and so on
[01:12:15] because that's part of what your books are about.
[01:12:17] I feel very aware of it.
[01:12:19] Like, you know, you ever watch a James Bond movie
[01:12:22] and you get out of the theater
[01:12:24] and you feel like you're James Bond.
[01:12:26] Yeah, okay.
[01:12:27] You know what I do?
[01:12:28] Absolutely.
[01:12:29] Like literally I would read a gentleman in Moscow
[01:12:32] and I swear to God my past...
[01:12:34] People would comment on my posture as I've gone into the next room.
[01:12:37] Like, oh, you're standing up much straighter
[01:12:39] and I felt like I had a better vocabulary.
[01:12:42] I felt much more at ease with the world.
[01:12:44] Like so your books like, you know,
[01:12:48] put the reader into these roles
[01:12:51] very, very well and that's part of what I enjoyed about them.
[01:12:54] And even look, this is a good segue into Even Hollywood
[01:12:57] which is kind of this spin-off novella, you know,
[01:13:00] so your book table for two is coming out.
[01:13:03] It's a bunch of short stories and in novella,
[01:13:06] the novella is almost as sequel to Rules of Civility.
[01:13:10] Not quite as sequel, I don't want to say that
[01:13:12] because again, for me, Rules of Civility
[01:13:14] was like the prequel to Even Hollywood.
[01:13:16] But Even Hollywood is Eve herself.
[01:13:20] And now I see it having read afterwards
[01:13:23] where she comes from.
[01:13:25] It's almost like she gets into Hollywood
[01:13:27] and everybody else is playing a role,
[01:13:30] but she's not really.
[01:13:32] She's really feels...
[01:13:34] I feel like she's herself.
[01:13:36] She's got this integrity that's beyond the role.
[01:13:38] People can't even understand her
[01:13:40] because she's beyond the roles of what happens in Hollywood.
[01:13:44] And I loved that about her character
[01:13:47] and following her...
[01:13:49] Like she makes decisions
[01:13:50] that the average person would not make
[01:13:52] throughout the novella.
[01:13:55] And it's an interesting way to see then Hollywood
[01:13:58] through her perspective,
[01:13:59] in your own perspective, like, oh my gosh,
[01:14:02] maybe I would have taken the money there.
[01:14:04] I would have taken this opportunity there
[01:14:05] and she doesn't because she's playing this higher role.
[01:14:09] Which I guess she learns
[01:14:11] in the hidden pages of roles of civility.
[01:14:14] Yeah, you know,
[01:14:16] this isn't early in roles of civility,
[01:14:19] Eve is going to car accident.
[01:14:21] So it's not a big spoiler,
[01:14:23] but it's early in the book.
[01:14:25] And she's always very smart.
[01:14:27] She's always sparkling about everybody.
[01:14:29] And she's always kind of a willful
[01:14:31] and independent and spunky and attractive.
[01:14:34] But what happens is...
[01:14:36] And I kind of remember going back
[01:14:38] to this sort of imaginative cycles.
[01:14:40] And imagining roles of civility,
[01:14:42] I knew her as this sort of great midwestern,
[01:14:45] spunky beauty who is independent
[01:14:47] and won't be ruled by her parents
[01:14:49] or by anybody else.
[01:14:51] And then she sort of imagined,
[01:14:53] well, what if you take that person
[01:14:55] and you're thrown through a windshield?
[01:14:57] Which is kind of what happens to her.
[01:14:59] And her beauty is damaged.
[01:15:02] She loses some use of her leg, whatever.
[01:15:05] What...
[01:15:06] I suddenly sort of asked myself,
[01:15:08] what is a steely version,
[01:15:10] you know, a hardened version
[01:15:12] of that person that we've come to know?
[01:15:15] Like as if the glass of the windshield
[01:15:19] is a wall and she...
[01:15:21] It's like the looking glass for her out.
[01:15:23] She goes through it
[01:15:24] and you carry with it all these personality traits
[01:15:27] but it's suddenly a hardened version of it.
[01:15:30] Because in a way,
[01:15:31] the accident was life cheating her
[01:15:34] in some weird way
[01:15:36] and her, you know, resending it.
[01:15:39] And but also having to toughen herself up
[01:15:41] to now go on.
[01:15:44] And so what comes out is this sort of as your right.
[01:15:48] You know, she becomes a person who survived that kind of thing
[01:15:52] is no longer gives a shit about the little stuff.
[01:15:55] You know what I mean?
[01:15:56] Like, she's moving forward
[01:15:58] at her own pace with her own mind
[01:16:00] and does not care about, you know,
[01:16:03] the expectations of others
[01:16:05] about the polite thing to do,
[01:16:07] you know, she should not crash.
[01:16:09] But it's a freeing thing for her.
[01:16:12] You know, she becomes a more independent person
[01:16:15] by virtue of having survived this accident, you know?
[01:16:19] And so then I can tell you...
[01:16:21] She could have also become...
[01:16:22] And perhaps in the rural civility,
[01:16:24] a little of this happened,
[01:16:26] she could also have become bitter and grasping
[01:16:28] because if she doesn't grasp for it now,
[01:16:30] she'll always lose it.
[01:16:31] Yeah, that's right.
[01:16:32] Because it was happened to her.
[01:16:33] Yeah, so she has a choice in that sense.
[01:16:35] And part of rural civility is her grappling
[01:16:38] with who is she going to be in the aftermath of this accident?
[01:16:41] And she kind of goes through some transitions.
[01:16:44] But then, you know, part of the fun of writing
[01:16:46] even Hollywood is because even Hollywood,
[01:16:51] you're right, it's not a sequel,
[01:16:52] but it does kind of, in essence, begin the day after
[01:16:56] rural civility, after Eve, or Eve.
[01:16:59] And so you get to take this personality of imagined
[01:17:03] and this sort of unique sort of combination of traits
[01:17:07] which makes her both independent and willful
[01:17:09] and charismatic too,
[01:17:11] and drop her into Hollywood, like what would happen?
[01:17:15] You know, that's kind of what...
[01:17:17] That's why I wrote it, right?
[01:17:18] It was kind of bugging me.
[01:17:20] Like, you know, we know she goes to California,
[01:17:22] but like I was like,
[01:17:23] what happens when you take her personality and drop it
[01:17:26] in late 30s Hollywood?
[01:17:28] And then you get to kind of a...
[01:17:30] You know, that spent years imagining
[01:17:32] all the things that would happen to her
[01:17:33] and then eventually got around to writing it.
[01:17:36] And why did you make that a novella,
[01:17:39] I mean, instead of a full novel?
[01:17:41] And that's sort of a naive question
[01:17:42] because you could do whatever you want with it.
[01:17:44] There's no expectation it could be a novel.
[01:17:46] But you could have maybe turned that into a full novel.
[01:17:50] It's a good question.
[01:17:51] It's great as it is.
[01:17:52] I'm not saying you should have.
[01:17:53] Thank you.
[01:17:54] So, you know...
[01:17:55] And I think the answer is that...
[01:17:58] It's clearly written in to some degree
[01:18:03] in the noir tradition.
[01:18:05] You know, it is overlapping
[01:18:08] with the noir genre
[01:18:12] and in a variety of ways.
[01:18:15] And something about it...
[01:18:17] I love it.
[01:18:18] But it felt...
[01:18:20] In writing it,
[01:18:22] the ambition of how that story,
[01:18:24] the story that it should be,
[01:18:25] was not going to be quite as intricate and layered
[01:18:30] and nuanced as a gentleman Moscow
[01:18:34] or Lincoln Highway
[01:18:35] or even Wollsa civility.
[01:18:36] I knew that.
[01:18:37] I knew it was going to be
[01:18:39] you know, a little faster moving
[01:18:41] and a little more interested in...
[01:18:44] A little bit more impressionistic.
[01:18:47] We meet these people.
[01:18:48] We meet Prentice.
[01:18:49] We meet, you know,
[01:18:50] Litzky, the photographer.
[01:18:52] We meet, you know,
[01:18:53] Wendell, the Weasel.
[01:18:54] And you're going to kind of see them
[01:18:56] in this...
[01:18:57] sort of...
[01:18:58] So, in essence,
[01:18:59] criminal events unfold.
[01:19:00] And at a rapid pace are resolved.
[01:19:03] And so, all that made me feel like
[01:19:05] I didn't want to take that
[01:19:07] and say, well, let's add 200 pages
[01:19:09] of other stuff, you know?
[01:19:11] Which felt like it would be...
[01:19:14] It would maybe push it towards the complexity of a novel
[01:19:17] that I aim for.
[01:19:19] But on the other hand,
[01:19:20] it would kind of undo a lot of what was there
[01:19:23] and the elegance of what's there
[01:19:25] and the...
[01:19:26] sort of the freshness of what's there.
[01:19:28] So, yeah.
[01:19:29] So, I ended up, you know, saying, you know what?
[01:19:32] It's going to be 200 pages.
[01:19:34] It's going to go through to its end.
[01:19:35] Which by the way,
[01:19:36] is a full novel length anyway.
[01:19:37] I don't know why I'm calling it a Bella.
[01:19:39] No, no, no, you're right.
[01:19:40] I call it that.
[01:19:41] I mean, because you're right.
[01:19:42] So, 10 to be 400, 500 pages.
[01:19:44] So, my novelist or, you know, something like that.
[01:19:46] So, it is shorter for me, you know?
[01:19:50] But here's what's interesting then.
[01:19:51] In the shorter fictions, again,
[01:19:54] I read those firsts and then I read the larger ones.
[01:19:56] But now looking back,
[01:19:58] did you feel constrained by the short story format?
[01:20:02] Like maybe you wouldn't be able to get as much characterization
[01:20:04] out of some of these characters
[01:20:06] or where you...
[01:20:07] You know, I don't know what you wrote first, honestly.
[01:20:09] The short stories are the...
[01:20:11] Those short stories were all written in the last 10 years.
[01:20:14] And...
[01:20:15] But I've been writing short stories, as I say, for, you know, 40 years or whatever.
[01:20:19] And a little bit more than that.
[01:20:22] I think you've got a sense in this and me.
[01:20:24] First of all, my short stories
[01:20:26] are a little longer than the average published short stories.
[01:20:30] Because the short length that you would find in the New Yorker
[01:20:34] or a Paris reviewer or whatever
[01:20:36] is not long enough for me to do what I like to do.
[01:20:38] And so they might run a little bit longer.
[01:20:41] But I think what they represent for the reader
[01:20:44] or for if someone's a fan of my work,
[01:20:46] you'll enjoy them even if you don't know my work.
[01:20:48] But if you're a fan of my work,
[01:20:49] what they do is they provide you a glimpse of an essence
[01:20:51] how I start things, right?
[01:20:53] Which is that...
[01:20:54] Because the nature of the short story is it is a glimpse.
[01:20:57] You know, it might have a...
[01:21:00] You know, a small narrative but compared to a novel.
[01:21:02] But it's a glimpse of something.
[01:21:03] A glimpse of a person, a glimpse of a series of events
[01:21:06] rather than this full drawn out picture.
[01:21:09] And but that's a perfect place for me to experiment
[01:21:12] with some of these things we've talked about.
[01:21:14] What's the setting?
[01:21:15] What's the tone?
[01:21:16] What's the tone of voice?
[01:21:17] What's the psychology of the narrator?
[01:21:19] What's the perspective in this historian?
[01:21:22] And how do we bring to life the people
[01:21:24] that the narrator bumps into?
[01:21:25] And how do we do it and with efficiency and economy?
[01:21:28] And so the short story is a great place
[01:21:31] to experiment with those things.
[01:21:34] And so, you know, those six stories that are set in New York,
[01:21:37] they have a...
[01:21:38] The tone is shifting.
[01:21:39] The narrator...
[01:21:41] It's just type of narrator shifting.
[01:21:42] It starts with omniscient, you know?
[01:21:44] And then it's kind of a series of stories
[01:21:45] where someone's observing somebody else.
[01:21:47] And then finally its story about something that's happening
[01:21:49] to the narrator.
[01:21:50] And so you have to make your choices about...
[01:21:54] I have an idea for a story.
[01:21:56] What is the best perspective from which to tell it?
[01:21:59] You know, which is a...
[01:22:00] And there is...
[01:22:01] Am I in it?
[01:22:02] Am I watching it?
[01:22:03] Am I watching anything about it?
[01:22:04] And what's the tone?
[01:22:05] Which is different, right?
[01:22:07] The perspective or point of view is kind of
[01:22:09] how I'm situated at the events.
[01:22:10] What do I know about them?
[01:22:12] How close do I am to them?
[01:22:14] Whereas the tone might be...
[01:22:16] Am I a sarcastic person?
[01:22:18] Or an omniscient narrator with sarcasm?
[01:22:20] Am I a generous one?
[01:22:22] Am I an impatient narrator?
[01:22:24] You know, am I whatever?
[01:22:26] Because...
[01:22:27] Am I someone who, you know, an narrator
[01:22:29] who never finishes what he's trying to say?
[01:22:31] You know, so those are choices that you're making
[01:22:34] in advance.
[01:22:36] And you're trying to feel out...
[01:22:37] I know what the story is about.
[01:22:38] I'm beginning to understand the characters and the events.
[01:22:40] But now the big question is...
[01:22:42] How am I going to tell this?
[01:22:43] From what angle?
[01:22:44] With what tone?
[01:22:45] And you start to experiment with different things.
[01:22:47] And you may rewrite the first couple of pages a number of times
[01:22:50] until you can kind of hear that voice.
[01:22:53] So as I say these...
[01:22:54] These stories really provide,
[01:22:56] I think, the reader...
[01:22:58] A kind of a window on the bigger process that's at play in the novel.
[01:23:03] And I'll say one other thing about it.
[01:23:05] I've been thinking a lot about this...
[01:23:07] I didn't used to think about it,
[01:23:08] but I've been thinking about it since I finished it.
[01:23:10] And so if you think about the novel as an art form,
[01:23:13] for the reader or for the writer,
[01:23:16] orientation is a very big component of it.
[01:23:19] So when you take any novel, you know, you love.
[01:23:23] And go and back and read the first ten pages.
[01:23:25] And I guarantee you there's enormous amounts of information in those ten pages
[01:23:29] that you may not even be conscious of.
[01:23:31] But they tell you, you know, the where of it.
[01:23:34] Okay, okay, okay.
[01:23:35] So this is Michigan in the 50s or whatever it is.
[01:23:38] Okay, it's Paris in the 20s.
[01:23:40] It tells you some of the main characters.
[01:23:42] It gives you a glimpse of their backgrounds, of their personalities.
[01:23:45] It can make you a sense of the stakes that are about to follow.
[01:23:48] Dad is sick, you know, or whatever the thing is.
[01:23:50] And they're on their way to the funeral.
[01:23:52] You know, I don't know.
[01:23:53] But the point being that there's a lot of that is going on very early in a novel.
[01:23:57] And that's basically about orientation.
[01:23:59] It's so that the reader who's about to go into this extended journey,
[01:24:04] knows where they're starting.
[01:24:06] Right?
[01:24:07] And so because if you go into it,
[01:24:09] if a reader goes into a book where it seems uncertain of where it is or who they are
[01:24:13] or where we're going,
[01:24:14] you only go on for so long before that becomes frustrated.
[01:24:18] Right? And so you want to lay some of that down
[01:24:21] so the reader feels confident that they know where they are.
[01:24:23] And then they can start to see how things unfold.
[01:24:26] And the way that novels build meaning is very much in a relationship
[01:24:31] to setting the reader comfortable in a situation
[01:24:35] and then shifting and providing more insight and deeper knowledge.
[01:24:39] But again, orientation is necessary to experience that unfolding
[01:24:44] that becomes the accumulation of meaning for the reader when taking in a novel.
[01:24:50] The emotional outcome, let's say or whatever it is.
[01:24:53] Well short stories, it's not that, right?
[01:24:57] You do not have the time to provide that orientation
[01:25:00] or to do this to stretch out the culmination of events
[01:25:03] or the shifting emotions or the shifting whatever.
[01:25:06] It has to all come very fast.
[01:25:09] And so what happens as a result I think is that short story is very much
[01:25:14] one of the pleasures of the short story is that it's very much more...
[01:25:17] It's the opposite of orientation. It's about surprise.
[01:25:20] It's not about having groundwork laid for me so I know where I am
[01:25:24] and now I can go on the journey.
[01:25:26] It's like, oh my god, wait, where are we?
[01:25:28] What did he say? Who is that? Who just said that?
[01:25:31] Where are they going?
[01:25:33] It starts kind of in the middle of things very strong way
[01:25:37] and you have to kind of catch up
[01:25:39] and then you're only going to get the glimpse.
[01:25:41] You're not going to see it all unfold.
[01:25:43] You're going to see everything in this half an hour of this person's life
[01:25:47] or in this three-day period
[01:25:49] and you're going to try to kind of get a feel for
[01:25:52] where is this all headed in the long run?
[01:25:54] Where I only have this little bit of information
[01:25:57] at my fingertips to gain a sense of that insight.
[01:26:02] But I think that's a different type of reading experience.
[01:26:06] But it's one that I think can be very enjoyable.
[01:26:09] Yeah, and it's interesting seeing how you describe your process with the novels
[01:26:14] and then seeing how you do it in the short stories.
[01:26:17] It's almost like you have to pick and choose in the short stories.
[01:26:21] Okay, am I going to go deep into the ideas?
[01:26:23] Am I going to go deep into the character?
[01:26:25] Like, you're not given the full rainbow
[01:26:27] so you're kind of trying to pick what colors you're going to use for each story.
[01:26:31] Where's Jettelma and Moscow?
[01:26:33] You know, I take that as the classic example.
[01:26:36] You've got this full Russian novel here from beginning to end.
[01:26:41] And yes, let's say the way it, you know, like with a short story,
[01:26:47] the way it ends might be a surprise but it's...
[01:26:51] The surprise doesn't have to be a sharp.
[01:26:54] It doesn't have to be as harsh.
[01:26:56] Like, a short story is going to most likely end in a harsh way
[01:27:00] because it's like a magic trick.
[01:27:02] Like, you built up the short story
[01:27:04] and then the rabbit's no longer in the hat.
[01:27:07] Where is it?
[01:27:08] And you don't know the short story is over.
[01:27:11] You know, I'm thinking...
[01:27:14] By the way, I never would bookmark fiction.
[01:27:17] I have your bookmarks all over your novels and short stories.
[01:27:21] But like, I love the ballad of Timothy Tushae.
[01:27:26] For one thing, I like how you are confronting issues in your own life
[01:27:33] in this short story.
[01:27:35] So, like for instance, we talked at the very beginning how...
[01:27:39] You came from a...
[01:27:41] Let's say, upper middle class to upper class family.
[01:27:44] You went to the great schools.
[01:27:45] You spent 20 years working in the finance business.
[01:27:49] And you see this character, Timothy,
[01:27:54] who wants to be a novelist from a very early age,
[01:27:56] he's asking himself, oh, he wishes his parents were alcoholics
[01:28:00] or got divorced at least, or something.
[01:28:02] Or something to write about.
[01:28:05] Instead, everything's gone well for him.
[01:28:08] But then this is the only time I've seen you refer to yourself.
[01:28:12] You know, you say...
[01:28:15] You take about three or four hundred words here
[01:28:18] to say perhaps this assessment is too cynical.
[01:28:21] It all likelihooded as influenced by the author's own experiences
[01:28:24] with compromise and his unself-conscious desire
[01:28:27] because choices seem inevitable and so on.
[01:28:30] You really go into yourself a little bit for a few paragraphs
[01:28:33] which you can argue for the sake of this story wasn't necessary,
[01:28:37] but you decided it included anyway.
[01:28:39] Like you say short stories about being a little bit more...
[01:28:44] I don't know how to say the words, I'll say it different word.
[01:28:47] A little more minimal.
[01:28:49] So, you could fit in the pages of a journal or whatever.
[01:28:52] But you allowed yourself to spend some words here
[01:28:56] on your own dealing with this issue of not having...
[01:29:03] maybe the conflicting background.
[01:29:06] Yeah, and I find that fun.
[01:29:12] In technical terms, it's the fourth wall kind of thing.
[01:29:18] Suddenly as a writer you're addressing the audience
[01:29:22] as the guy writing us by the way.
[01:29:25] I believed in when he said it too, whatever the version is.
[01:29:29] I've always enjoyed that when I encounter it in drama
[01:29:33] or we see it in television or whatever.
[01:29:37] But that disorienting shift,
[01:29:40] we know the rules of the story.
[01:29:43] We're going to hear from the narrator and this is going to happen.
[01:29:46] Suddenly, I was like, no, no, I want to talk about myself for a second.
[01:29:49] It adds a little strange energy to it.
[01:29:52] Now my English editor, my primary editor is of course in America
[01:29:56] where I'm primary published.
[01:29:58] But my English editor may weigh in and say, oh, you know, about the mainstream.
[01:30:03] And she wanted to remove that.
[01:30:05] And I was like, what? Remove it!
[01:30:07] Are you kidding?
[01:30:08] But I could say why...
[01:30:10] The only reason I could see why she wanted to remove it
[01:30:13] is because I wondered out loud.
[01:30:17] I had to take a step back and ask, was this good or bad?
[01:30:21] Not in a critical way.
[01:30:23] But because you have to ask with a short story, it needs to have...
[01:30:27] Like if I'm editing it, I'm thinking of what to cut.
[01:30:31] And this clearly was extra.
[01:30:33] So if I were your editor, I would have to give you permission to have extra in it.
[01:30:38] But okay, I didn't really decide if this is your choice.
[01:30:44] But I thought it was a good thing because finally I get to see as the reader
[01:30:49] and you've written a lot of words, this is an issue you're dealing with.
[01:30:53] The issue that Timidys did.
[01:30:55] And the issue that all writers deal with is am I interesting enough?
[01:30:58] Look, Jack Kerwack probably didn't think he was interesting enough.
[01:31:01] So he had to hitchhike across the country
[01:31:03] and pick up someone who was interesting enough.
[01:31:05] Dean Moriety.
[01:31:06] So every writer you can see deals with this issue.
[01:31:10] Marcel Proust had to pretend to be in high society to get stories.
[01:31:16] A Truman Capote had to interview murderers to get stories.
[01:31:19] Like writers go through this.
[01:31:21] So this was seeing your glimpse into that.
[01:31:24] Yeah, well that's right.
[01:31:26] And then of course I also...
[01:31:29] There was something else in here which is more subtly about you
[01:31:32] and about the process of writing, which is okay, he's...
[01:31:37] How do I do this without?
[01:31:39] So he writes signatures of famous authors.
[01:31:44] Let's put it at that.
[01:31:46] And we don't know whether they're good or bad,
[01:31:48] we're kind of taking the word for it from one character.
[01:31:50] And then there's another character who has a different
[01:31:53] maybe more impressive take on whether they're good or bad.
[01:31:56] And it's interesting to see these perspectives
[01:31:58] are not Timidys abilities a writer,
[01:32:01] but literally Timidys ability to mimic a writer's signature,
[01:32:05] which is perhaps metaphor for writing.
[01:32:09] And I thought that was a very interesting way to do that metaphor.
[01:32:13] Yeah, thank you.
[01:32:15] And I want...
[01:32:18] With short stories, you got to be much more careful than novels
[01:32:21] about getting stories.
[01:32:22] It's true.
[01:32:23] I just enjoy it all of them.
[01:32:26] Like I will survive the bootlegger
[01:32:28] and I can see these are a little bit more you,
[01:32:31] particularly they're in New York, they're around now,
[01:32:34] they're happening.
[01:32:35] And by the way, I read the stories before I read Eve in Hollywood.
[01:32:39] I wasn't quite sure if I was at home,
[01:32:42] am I in for the 200 pay?
[01:32:44] I'm just reading short stories.
[01:32:45] You're now going to read a 200 page, you know,
[01:32:47] quote unquote, navel.
[01:32:48] But I did and that led me to your other books.
[01:32:50] And it was so pleasurable.
[01:32:52] So very, very listening.
[01:32:54] Table for two is a must read.
[01:32:57] Of course, the other books are as well.
[01:32:59] How do you feel about...
[01:33:01] I saw the trailer just a few minutes ago
[01:33:03] about a gentleman in Moscow.
[01:33:05] How do you feel about their translation into TV?
[01:33:08] I think they did a terrific job.
[01:33:10] And you know, there...
[01:33:13] In a minute, I mean, you write a gentleman in Moscow
[01:33:17] is in a way no longer mine.
[01:33:19] It's now in the possession of readers.
[01:33:21] And one of the great things about the serious gentleman in Moscow
[01:33:26] is that the writer, the director,
[01:33:28] the head of costume,
[01:33:29] the head of set design,
[01:33:30] you and McGregor, the star,
[01:33:32] Mary Elizabeth Winstead,
[01:33:33] who's the lead actress and you and wife,
[01:33:36] they were all very conscious of the fact
[01:33:40] that the expectations they had to meet were the readers.
[01:33:44] Not mine, not paramots.
[01:33:47] But the question was...
[01:33:49] They read the book very carefully multiple times
[01:33:51] and carved it up and marked it up themselves
[01:33:54] from each angle of their craft.
[01:33:56] What does the hotel look like?
[01:33:57] What are people wearing?
[01:33:59] What are the thematics that we're trying to express?
[01:34:02] And they really did a beautiful job.
[01:34:05] So it's really an incredible visual experience
[01:34:09] to see it realized by them.
[01:34:12] And you know, you and his amazing.
[01:34:14] And the series...
[01:34:16] You and his...
[01:34:17] Because he's in almost every scene,
[01:34:19] it's an eight-hour series
[01:34:20] and he's in almost every scene.
[01:34:22] He ages 30 years.
[01:34:23] He goes through a wide range of emotions and experiences
[01:34:25] and he is unbelievable.
[01:34:27] It's terrific.
[01:34:28] But I'll tell you a funny thing about it
[01:34:31] to give you a flavor for how much he thinks about it.
[01:34:36] We spent...
[01:34:37] He reached out before they were going into production
[01:34:40] and said, you know, could you have an hour to do a Zoom with me?
[01:34:43] Because I want to know everything about the count
[01:34:46] and the hotel and the story that is not in the book.
[01:34:48] I've read the book many times.
[01:34:50] I want to know what's not there that could help me.
[01:34:53] And so in the course of this Zoom,
[01:34:56] we talked about different aspects
[01:34:58] and he asked questions.
[01:34:59] And I offered up different things that are not in the book
[01:35:01] that I thought would be of interest to him.
[01:35:03] And eventually we got to, he said, you know,
[01:35:06] how does it begin?
[01:35:08] Like, how does...
[01:35:09] And he...
[01:35:10] Sort of like you were asking earlier.
[01:35:11] And so I walked him through kind of the process
[01:35:12] of inventing the character
[01:35:13] and where I started
[01:35:14] and sort of the iterative cycle
[01:35:16] of getting a richer and richer sense.
[01:35:18] And then I talked about the few sentences
[01:35:21] at the beginning of, you know,
[01:35:23] the book where I really sort of knew the count
[01:35:26] in a more sharper.
[01:35:28] Well, last week was the premiere New York City.
[01:35:33] And so after the premiere, you know,
[01:35:37] he and I were talking at the after party.
[01:35:40] And he came up and he said, hey,
[01:35:42] we were talking about one of the opening scenes.
[01:35:45] Sorry, one of the scenes in the first hour.
[01:35:48] And as Rambi said, hey, did you notice?
[01:35:50] You notice that when Halekki calls me to his office?
[01:35:53] Did you notice?
[01:35:54] And I'm like, no, you didn't notice what?
[01:35:56] And he goes, I took the stairs two steps at a time
[01:36:00] as it been my habit since the Academy.
[01:36:03] You know, so he had logged this
[01:36:06] from our conversation which was two years before.
[01:36:09] And much as I, you know, used as a way
[01:36:12] as an orientation for myself in inventing the narrative,
[01:36:16] when I had told him that story,
[01:36:18] he was like, yep, I get it, you know,
[01:36:20] and he used it.
[01:36:23] And he then said, you know, I said, took me a while.
[01:36:25] I had to train myself to take the steps two at a time.
[01:36:28] And he said, but he says, you'll notice that later in the series,
[01:36:31] when I age, I start taking him one step at a time.
[01:36:34] You know, when I've lost that thing.
[01:36:36] And the book says, I think it was 1946.
[01:36:39] Yeah.
[01:36:40] It's 1946.
[01:36:41] It says he starts taking them one step at a time
[01:36:43] and that's your way of saying he views himself as older,
[01:36:46] which I thought it was much better than him just thinking to himself,
[01:36:49] oh, I'm older now.
[01:36:50] Yeah.
[01:36:51] So you can see, it's not like just a payday for you and you know,
[01:36:56] or whatever, it is that he has internalized his best he can,
[01:37:01] both the experience of the character,
[01:37:03] personality and the language of the book as a way of trying to
[01:37:07] through acting, you know, realize the character.
[01:37:11] You know, it's interesting because a gentleman in Moscow,
[01:37:14] one of the attractive things about it,
[01:37:16] is it's a weirdly aspirational kind of book in that all people
[01:37:22] have this feeling that they would like to be,
[01:37:24] I don't want to say aristocratic in a boring way,
[01:37:28] but people want to move up in wealth and class
[01:37:32] and be able to enjoy fine things in life.
[01:37:37] So it's aspirational in the sense that here's somebody who,
[01:37:40] regardless of how you strip them of title and home and whatever,
[01:37:44] he has this quality to him, this personality to him,
[01:37:48] but also this idea of living in a hotel is very aspirational.
[01:37:54] I'll tell you when I first moved to New York City as an adult,
[01:37:58] after a year or so and I finally was making a little bit better living,
[01:38:03] I moved into the Chelsea hotel and stayed there for many years.
[01:38:07] Yeah.
[01:38:08] So I lived in a hotel for a long time and I kind of know that feeling
[01:38:12] of knowing the people who work in the restaurant for years,
[01:38:16] knowing the people who work behind the bell hop and so on,
[01:38:20] knowing all the bell hops and knowing the maids
[01:38:22] and knowing about half the people lived at that time in the 90s,
[01:38:26] about half the people lived in the Chelsea hotel
[01:38:28] and half the people were vacationing into the hotel,
[01:38:32] they were staying as hotel guests.
[01:38:34] And so there's a weird dynamic when that happens
[01:38:36] of shifting characters and stories.
[01:38:38] And so I got that feeling when I was reading through this,
[01:38:41] that it felt like that feeling that I once felt.
[01:38:44] So which for me is an aspirational kind of feeling
[01:38:47] because I always loved the idea of living in a hotel.
[01:38:49] No, I'm jealous of your experience.
[01:38:51] I would have loved to live to the hotel Chelsea for a while.
[01:38:54] It was fascinating particularly you're just a few years older than me
[01:38:59] so it was a very good time in the 90s to live there.
[01:39:03] No, no, I remember it.
[01:39:05] I remember it.
[01:39:06] And you know, I've one smaller question that's kind of a final question.
[01:39:13] But there's a lot of patience in your books.
[01:39:16] And obviously as you described the way you write it,
[01:39:19] I mean some novelist write a book a year.
[01:39:23] Like a lot of thriller writers write a book a year.
[01:39:26] And it's not a criticism.
[01:39:28] Their books are great. It's no criticism.
[01:39:30] Your process is a little different.
[01:39:31] You said you'd take like two, three, four years maybe
[01:39:34] to set the characters and then to start figuring out the plots
[01:39:38] and what's happening.
[01:39:39] And then you sit down and it takes you a year, a year and a half
[01:39:42] to write the book.
[01:39:44] So there's a lot of patience.
[01:39:45] And the books themselves like again a gentleman in Moscow
[01:39:49] it takes place over a period of many decades.
[01:39:53] And so you have to, there's certain patience with the reader kind of dives
[01:39:58] into this world knowing he's going to be in there for many decades.
[01:40:02] And this is an odd question.
[01:40:05] But before you were writing these novels,
[01:40:08] you worked for a financial asset management firm.
[01:40:13] And I took the liberty of looking at the portfolio of that firm
[01:40:17] in the 13 F filings.
[01:40:19] You're stocks.
[01:40:20] I'm not yours okay.
[01:40:21] And you're not involved with the company anymore.
[01:40:23] And I don't know you haven't been for ten years.
[01:40:25] But the portfolio picks are very patient.
[01:40:29] Instead of being in the hottest new AI company,
[01:40:32] you're biggest and again it's not yours.
[01:40:35] The firm exists without you.
[01:40:37] It's grown.
[01:40:38] But it's a construction company.
[01:40:40] It's the largest pick in the portfolio.
[01:40:42] Like it's really like there's a patience to that portfolio.
[01:40:46] It's not the average portfolio.
[01:40:48] And is this like a reflection of your personality a little bit?
[01:40:52] The patience throughout all these activities.
[01:40:55] Well that's an interesting question.
[01:40:57] I mean in the investment arena,
[01:41:00] we were very interested in essence.
[01:41:03] We had a research driven process and value bias.
[01:41:07] We focused on higher quality businesses.
[01:41:09] But if you summed it up,
[01:41:11] we were interested in arbitraging the short term fluctuation
[01:41:18] in perception against the long term excellence of a company.
[01:41:21] So, you know, the stocks in a company can go up and down.
[01:41:26] For all kinds of reasons.
[01:41:27] And they're not always necessary to be related to the long term
[01:41:31] process of the company.
[01:41:33] They may not even be related to the short term process
[01:41:36] of the company.
[01:41:37] They would relate to a shift in attitude or change in the economy
[01:41:39] and all these things.
[01:41:40] So, that's the beauty of the stock market.
[01:41:42] It's constantly changing in the short term the valuation
[01:41:45] of a business which over the long term shouldn't vary that much.
[01:41:49] You know from words it's heavy.
[01:41:51] If it's a business that you can understand into the future.
[01:41:55] So, that, you know, that's,
[01:41:58] patience is rewarded if you have the discipline to choose
[01:42:02] selectively in the investment business.
[01:42:05] And that's the way that we approached the art.
[01:42:08] You know, in my writing I never really thought about it as sort of the Canadian.
[01:42:12] But you're right.
[01:42:13] I think that,
[01:42:15] I don't think I learned this from the investment business into my writing.
[01:42:19] But it is the nature of writing.
[01:42:21] If you think about it in your life,
[01:42:23] like if you have children,
[01:42:25] you know, you'd grow out dealing with your siblings,
[01:42:28] dealing with financial decisions in your life, whatever else.
[01:42:32] If you push to side everything
[01:42:35] and you gave yourself like lots of time
[01:42:38] to how you're going to raise your kids
[01:42:42] or how you're going to respond to your mother
[01:42:44] or how you're going to deal with this situation that's surface
[01:42:47] with your sibling or whatever the issues are.
[01:42:51] You would take that time and sort of think it all out
[01:42:54] and to prepare,
[01:42:56] and to be judicious,
[01:42:57] and to find the right attitude
[01:42:58] and say the right things.
[01:42:59] And, you know,
[01:43:00] and you'd be, you know, a perfect person.
[01:43:03] But life's not like that, right?
[01:43:05] It happens at a pace where
[01:43:07] your best instincts
[01:43:09] and your best intentions are often overwhelmed by,
[01:43:12] you know, the sudden surge of the emotion
[01:43:15] or the mishearing or the,
[01:43:18] you know, whatever,
[01:43:19] the battle of the conversation.
[01:43:20] What are all these things that lead you
[01:43:24] or you're exhausted
[01:43:26] or you're exasperated
[01:43:27] or whatever the difference?
[01:43:29] So, well, writing
[01:43:31] is a world in which it's all slowed down.
[01:43:35] Right? There is no,
[01:43:37] in the way that I approach you.
[01:43:38] Right? I don't have to publish a book every year.
[01:43:40] So, I don't have that.
[01:43:41] I can spend four years,
[01:43:43] I can spend five years.
[01:43:44] I have nobody who's asking me what's happening in it.
[01:43:47] Nobody knows what's happening in it.
[01:43:48] It's all to me.
[01:43:49] I don't share it with anybody.
[01:43:51] And what that allows,
[01:43:52] I have to have a certain amount of patience and endurance
[01:43:55] because I'm going to spend four years writing it.
[01:43:57] No one's going to see it.
[01:43:58] And I'm not going to know what they think about it.
[01:44:00] And if you know,
[01:44:02] I don't know what's going to be successful.
[01:44:04] But that's fine.
[01:44:05] What I gain is that
[01:44:07] I can get myself down to,
[01:44:10] in a way,
[01:44:11] I could be my best self,
[01:44:12] you know, as a human being.
[01:44:14] Which is that as I'm listening to the characters,
[01:44:16] as I'm drafting the character,
[01:44:17] presenting the characters,
[01:44:19] as I'm creating this world,
[01:44:21] I don't have to fall on my,
[01:44:24] on any sense of urgency or impatience
[01:44:27] or frustration or whatever.
[01:44:29] I can build it all on,
[01:44:31] you know,
[01:44:32] the pursuit of understanding reality and human nature
[01:44:36] in its finest form
[01:44:38] and then to try to relay it in a fashion
[01:44:41] which is at its finest level.
[01:44:44] And so,
[01:44:45] so yes, the, you know,
[01:44:47] the freedom of time in the writing process
[01:44:50] allows me to,
[01:44:52] I think, to achieve a better outcome.
[01:44:56] There's the freedom of time.
[01:44:59] I'm just curious though,
[01:45:00] there's psychology of it.
[01:45:02] Like many people don't have,
[01:45:04] don't want the patience
[01:45:06] because they want the book to get out
[01:45:08] so they could know if people are going to like it.
[01:45:10] You're right, you're right.
[01:45:12] And that's, you have to,
[01:45:14] I don't tell people what my books are about
[01:45:16] because they give you a dopamine
[01:45:19] that is,
[01:45:21] it's kind of productive.
[01:45:23] Like if I have a great idea for a novel
[01:45:25] and I'm working on it
[01:45:26] and I went out to dinner
[01:45:27] and I said, yeah, this is what I'm working on.
[01:45:29] And I rattling off the story
[01:45:30] and they're like, oh, that's great.
[01:45:31] Dope means surge
[01:45:32] and I'm like, yeah, there we go.
[01:45:33] Manel, somebody happy with that.
[01:45:35] You do that 50 times
[01:45:36] and you're like,
[01:45:37] I'm not interested in the story anymore.
[01:45:39] So you have to kind of reverse it.
[01:45:40] You have to say, okay,
[01:45:41] I'm going to get a big dopamine hit
[01:45:44] when this lands
[01:45:45] and I am going to preserve
[01:45:47] a sense of internal urgency
[01:45:49] by deferring the smallest window
[01:45:53] of pleasure
[01:45:54] from this task
[01:45:56] until the last minute.
[01:45:57] And you just keep
[01:45:59] the discipline of deferring
[01:46:02] the potential for pleasure
[01:46:04] or eventually someone reading the story
[01:46:06] until I'm absolutely done.
[01:46:09] And that's very,
[01:46:10] that didn't,
[01:46:11] looking forward to that moment
[01:46:14] helps me in a way
[01:46:16] survive the four years in silence.
[01:46:18] Well, thank you for being patient
[01:46:21] with all my questions.
[01:46:23] I really appreciate it.
[01:46:25] I mean, it's a pleasure
[01:46:27] to talk to an author like you
[01:46:29] and indulge myself
[01:46:31] in learning the process.
[01:46:33] Plus, I just absolutely love
[01:46:35] the books.
[01:46:36] I did not expect to.
[01:46:37] I'm, I really love
[01:46:39] minimalist writers.
[01:46:41] I mean, I hate categorizing
[01:46:42] writers at all.
[01:46:43] Some are,
[01:46:44] you could be minimalist,
[01:46:45] you could be maximalist,
[01:46:46] it doesn't matter.
[01:46:47] But I really tend towards
[01:46:50] like let's say,
[01:46:52] I don't know if you follow
[01:46:53] like a Dennis Johnson type of
[01:46:54] short story writer
[01:46:56] or I can name a dozen others.
[01:46:59] But I absolutely loved
[01:47:01] every word in your novels.
[01:47:03] I've read them out loud
[01:47:04] to my wife.
[01:47:05] She really appreciated the scene
[01:47:07] when he first meets
[01:47:09] you know, his lady friend
[01:47:12] and the dogs.
[01:47:13] Yes, yeah.
[01:47:14] She thinks that's how
[01:47:17] parents mess up with kids.
[01:47:19] It's not treating their dogs like that.
[01:47:21] So she's like,
[01:47:22] really, she's a tell him
[01:47:23] when you talk to him,
[01:47:24] I said that about that scene.
[01:47:25] So I'm telling you.
[01:47:26] Thank you.
[01:47:28] James has been a pleasure.
[01:47:29] You were,
[01:47:30] it was really,
[01:47:31] I appreciate all the,
[01:47:32] the,
[01:47:33] the thoroughness that you've read my work.
[01:47:35] I appreciate what you've had to say about
[01:47:36] and appreciate the nuances of your questions.
[01:47:39] Yeah, thank you.
[01:47:40] And good luck with both
[01:47:41] the release of Table for Two.
[01:47:43] Good luck with the launch of the show
[01:47:45] and please, when your next book comes out,
[01:47:47] come on the podcast again.
[01:47:48] I'd love to chat.
[01:47:49] Thanks.
[01:47:50] Be my pleasure.
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